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Some people think that there should be common official language other think that it will lose the importance of local language so it should not be practiced discuss both view

Some people think that there should be common official language other think that it will lose the importance of local language so it should not be practiced discuss both view AJaBL
Irrefutably, with the passage of time a considerable changes can be witnessed in the priorities and living style of people. Few folks believe that official language should become common while another believe that it will lose the importance of local linguistic so it should not be practiced. However, this essay leads to a charged debate that compel me to look into its both accepts more closely. To commence with, innumerable reasons exist behind this phenomenon. Firstly, official language make word has a global Village. To be more precise, if people taught same language then strong bonding exits between the masses. For example, a survey has conducted by Cambridge University verifies that strong relationship exist in among people with the help of same language. Secondly, folks communicate and find job easily. To be more specific, masses donot need any another language so they do so they communicate with other people in same language as well as they will find any job without any trouble. Hence, these are the reason of this case. Although official language is crucial for stability and development, it is not to say that it has no detrimental features. Primarily, official language will lose the importance of local language because the masses like the national language that means they easily find a job so they do not love the local language. For example, a survey has conducted by British council clarifies that around 40% masses do not like the local language because the national language become important. Secondarily, many local lingo exist. To be more detail, massed feel shame to speak the local language so these language become extinct. In other words, these are the factors of the predicament. To put into nutshell, according to my thinking, all languages have own importance so people speak local lingo as well as national lingo.
Irrefutably
, with the passage of time a considerable
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changes
can
be witnessed
in the priorities and living style of
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people
. Few folks believe that
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official
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language
should become common while another
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believe
that it will lose the importance of
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local
linguistic
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so
it should not
be practiced
.
However
, this essay leads to a charged debate that compel me to look into its both accepts more
closely
. To commence with, innumerable reasons exist behind this phenomenon.
Firstly
,
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official
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language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
word has a global Village. To be more precise, if
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people
taught same
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language
then strong bonding exits between the masses.
For example
, a survey has conducted by Cambridge University verifies that strong relationship exist in among
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people
with the
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help
of same
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language
.
Secondly
, folks communicate and find job
easily
. To be more specific, masses
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donot
need any another
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language
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so
they do
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so
they communicate with other
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people
in same
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language
as well
as they will find any job without any trouble.
Hence
, these are the reason of this case. Although
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official
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language
is crucial for stability and development, it is not to say that it has no detrimental features.
Primarily
,
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official
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language
will lose the importance of
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local
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language
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because
the masses like the national
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language
that means they
easily
find a job
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so
they do not
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love
the
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local
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language
.
For example
, a survey has conducted by British council clarifies that around 40% masses do not like the
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local
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language
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because
the national
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language
become
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important
.
Secondarily
,
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many
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local
lingo exist. To be more detail, massed feel shame to speak the
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local
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language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
these
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language
become extinct.
In other words
, these are the factors of the predicament. To put into nutshell, according to my thinking, all
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languages
have
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own
importance
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so
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people
speak
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local
lingo
as well
as national lingo.
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IELTS essay Some people think that there should be common official language other think that it will lose the importance of local language so it should not be practiced discuss both view

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
304 words
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