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Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?

Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level? PMrGJ
In this contemporary era, population is increasing day by day. Owing to this, traffic congestion stucked by the travellers; which is the grave concern for every nation on this earth. I am ensuiuing my views on this topic. Societies and Individuals can play a vital role to control the traffic. Such as - they can march on roads; poster presentation along with this small act of awareness can help people alot. They should take part in the Non -Goverment- Organisations (NGO) 's program's of awareness. For Instance - Bachpan is a NGO which is in anand vihar; conduct small act on street to aware people about the traffic and pollution. If traffic grow than definitily pollution will enlarge and that is harmful for every living being, as carbon dioxide expand and it affects on global warming would be really detrimental. Socities and Indviduals may be the reason that vehicles are available at low proces. However, we all togther control it; by sharing our cab with each other and also by the use of public transport. People should follow the norms of Government on signs and signal, this will be helpful in decreasing the traffic. For Instance, the people of USA always respect the traffic controller as well as rules, that's why they are always in time on their destination. To draw the curtain, I would like to say, socities and people should start some awareness programs to teach people about traffic rules. Along with this, they can reduce their use of vehicles for short destinations. Follow the traffic rules will help all the people from traffic.
In this contemporary era, population is increasing day by day. Owing to this,
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traffic
congestion
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by the
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travellers
; which is the grave concern for every nation on this earth. I am
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ensuiuing
my views on this topic.

Societies and Individuals can play a vital role to control the
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traffic
. Such as
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-
they can march on roads; poster presentation along with this
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small
act of awareness can
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help
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people
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alot
. They should
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take part
in the Non
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-Goverment
-
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Organisations
(NGO) 's program's of awareness.
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Bachpan
is
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NGO which is in
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anand
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vihar
; conduct
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small
act on street to aware
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people
about the
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traffic
and pollution. If
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traffic
grow than
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definitily
pollution will enlarge and
that is
harmful for every living being, as carbon dioxide expand and it affects on global warming would be
really
detrimental.

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Socities
and
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Indviduals
may be the reason that vehicles are available at low
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proces
.
However
, we all
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togther
control it; by sharing our cab with each other and
also
by the
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use
of public transport.
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People
should follow the norms of
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Government
on signs and signal, this will be helpful in decreasing the
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traffic
.
For Instance
, the
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people
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of USA
always respect the
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traffic
controller
as well
as
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rules
, that's why they are always in time on their destination.

To draw the curtain, I would like to say,
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socities
and
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people
should
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start
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some
awareness programs to teach
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people
about
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traffic
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rules
. Along with this, they can
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reduce
their
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use
of vehicles for short destinations. Follow the
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traffic
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rules
will
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help
all the
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IELTS essay Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
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