Traffic congestion has become a global dilemma these days. In certain towns and cities these problems are inevitable. I partially agree with the statement. Their are certain steps that should also be taken to avoid the traffic jams such as improving public transport or increasing in fuel price or penalizing people on using more than one vehicle by each family. I will explain these steps in my essay below.
To embark upon, evading the traffic collusion, improvement in public transportation should be the top most priority. For example introducing the underground services or skyscrapers could help the traffic to stay under control. Many countries have already implemented these ideas. Such as Japan has successfully began these services which help them to control the traffic about 20% in last five years. This is the remarkable control I must say. However, it should not be forgotten that government need to invest unusual amount of capital to implement these technologies.
Further, the Government need to take the initiative in sense of increasing in fuel pricing. This step could be basic but very effective in terms of holding people back of using their own vehicles and inclined towards using the public transports. For instance, in the UK, government has imposed many responsibilities to the public for using the vehicles such as CO2 emission charges, mileage expenses, maintenance charges and others.
To elucidate, reduction in traffic pollution not only helps people to move from one place to another more freely but also helps reducing CO2 emission and greenhouse gases which affecting not just one environment but the entire globe very badly.
Traffic
congestion has become a global dilemma these days. In certain towns and cities these problems are inevitable. I
partially
agree
with the statement.
Their
are certain steps that should
also
be taken
to avoid the
traffic
jams such as improving
public
transport or increasing in fuel price or penalizing
people
on using more than one vehicle by each family. I will
explain
these steps in my essay below.
To embark upon, evading the
traffic
collusion, improvement in
public
transportation should be the top most priority.
For example
introducing the underground services or skyscrapers could
help
the
traffic
to stay under control.
Many
countries have already implemented these
ideas
. Such as Japan has
successfully
began
these services which
help
them to control the
traffic
about 20% in last five years. This is the remarkable control I
must
say.
However
, it should not
be forgotten
that
government
need to invest unusual amount of capital to implement these technologies.
Further
, the
Government
need to take the initiative in sense of increasing in fuel pricing. This step could be basic
but
very
effective in terms of holding
people
back of using their
own
vehicles and inclined towards using the
public
transports.
For instance
, in the UK,
government
has imposed
many
responsibilities to the
public
for using the vehicles such as CO2 emission charges, mileage expenses, maintenance charges
and others
.
To elucidate, reduction in
traffic
pollution not
only
helps
people
to
move
from one place to another more
freely
but
also
helps
reducing
CO2 emission and greenhouse gases which affecting not
just
one environment
but
the entire globe
very
badly
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes