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traffic jam is a serious problem

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Along with the rapid development of society, various problems have confronted people. One of the most pressing of which is traffic jam is an urgent problem in most of the countries around the world. This essay will discuss this situation in Vietnam and recommend some solutions. To conclude, gridlock is still a considerable problem. If the government provide pleasant facility and update the infrastructure, I think more and more people will use public transport instead of their own vehicle.
Along with the rapid development of society, various problems have confronted
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people
. One of the most pressing of which is traffic jam is an urgent problem in most of the countries around the world. This essay will discuss this situation in Vietnam and recommend
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some
solutions.
To conclude
, gridlock is
still
a considerable problem. If the
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government
provide pleasant facility and update the infrastructure, I
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think
more and more
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people
will
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use
public transport
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own
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IELTS essay traffic jam is a serious problem

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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