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Due to advance technology, it is possible to work form home. Some people say that this beefits the employees more then the employment. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to advance technology, it is possible to work form home. Some people say that this beefits the employees more then the employment. qQDmr
Nowadays everything is easy to do with the help of modern technology which is developed in recent years. Advance technology makes it a possibility to do work from home and some people believe that it is good for the employer more the company. There are some major aspects related to statemen which are discussed in upcoming paragraphs along with supporting statements. To begin with, due to coved situation when everything is shut down the people do their work from home which help them to run their houses. now so workers want to continue with this thing to work from home they believe that it helps full for them because they can take care of families and spend maximum time with them as well as do work from home. next, if employers do not go to offices it will save their money which they spend on other works and companies saver their convinace charges which they pay to employees. if humans do not come office it will also help to reduce other expenses like electricity bills, any new equipment expenses, or brokerage expenses extra. On the other hand, there are some people who believe that if they do work from home workers are not able to get socialized with others because which impacts their career growth as well as personal growth. employers how to get know about other workers, senior officers or their bosses without meet them face to face. And it may decline the company profits or company name because of how companies came to know their workers are working or not at their houses. To conclude, working from home is helpful for those workers who live in other states just because of their work but it also reduces the accuracy to do work.
Nowadays everything is easy to do with the
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help
of modern technology which
is developed
in recent years. Advance technology
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makes
it a possibility to do
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work
from home and
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some
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people
believe that it is
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good
for the employer more the
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company
. There are
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some
major aspects related to
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statemen
which
are discussed
in upcoming paragraphs along with supporting statements.

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begin
with, due to
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coved
situation when everything
is shut
down the
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people
do their
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work
from home which
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help
them to run their
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houses
.
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now
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workers
want to continue with this thing to
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work
from home they believe that it
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helps
full for them
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because
they can take care of families and spend maximum time with them
as well
as do
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work
from home.
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next
, if employers do not go to offices it will save their money which they spend on
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other
works and
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companies
saver their
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convinace
charges which they pay to employees.
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if
humans do not
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come
office it will
also
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help
to
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reduce
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other
expenses like electricity bills, any new equipment expenses, or brokerage expenses extra.

On the
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hand, there are
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people
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work
from home
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workers
are not able to
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get
socialized with others
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because
which impacts their career growth
as well
as personal growth.
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employers
how to
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get
know about
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other
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workers
, senior officers or their bosses without
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meet
them face to face. And it may decline the
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company
profits or
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company
name
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because
of how
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companies
came to know their
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workers
are working or not at their
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houses
.

To conclude
, working from home is helpful for those
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workers
who
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in
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states
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of their
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work
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it
also
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reduces
the accuracy to do
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work
.
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IELTS essay Due to advance technology, it is possible to work form home. Some people say that this beefits the employees more then the employment.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
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