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Traffic congestion is a common problem with which contemporary governmental officials from different countries are dealing.

Traffic congestion is a common problem with which contemporary governmental officials from different countries are dealing. Many people assume that the construction of new wide roads will solve the given problem. Though I concede that installation of the underground will diminish traffic jams in big cities. In this essay, the reasons why I think so will be discussed. A controversial issue of traffic congestion could be tackled by building new roads. Also, alternative ways to get to other parts of the city will help to avoid potential traffic for some time. However, it should be taken into account that not all cities and towns have enough free land spaces considering recent baby boomers. On the other hand, others argue that cheaper public transportations such as trains and the subway will considerably affect the current situation with traffic. My view is that this solution should be implemented in fast-growing cities like Nur-Sultan, Shymkent, etc. First of all, subways more convenient and cheaper for middle-class families and at one time it can move with more people than cars. Also, since it will be constructed under the ground it will not take space above the ground. In conclusion, it is widely accepted that nobel roads will definitely resolve a problem with traffic jams; however, it is worth noting that this solution can not be used in all cities due to limitation on land space. It is imperative that the issue of traffic be resolved as soon as possible to avoid the potential problematic outcomes to mankind that traffics will bring. I believe that governmental authorities must spend their budget on the construction of train lines and subways.
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jams in
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big
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. In this essay, the reasons why I
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.

A controversial issue of
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traffic
congestion could
be tackled
by building new roads.
Also
, alternative ways to
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get
to other parts of the city will
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to avoid potential
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traffic
for
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time.
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, it should
be taken
into account that not all
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cities
and towns have
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enough
free land spaces considering recent baby boomers.

On the other hand
, others argue that cheaper public transportations such as trains and the subway will
considerably
affect the
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current
situation with
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traffic
. My view is that this solution should
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in
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fast
-growing
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cities
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Nur-Sultan
,
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Shymkent
, etc.
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First of all
, subways more convenient and cheaper for middle-
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class
families and at one time it can
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move
with more
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people
than cars.
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, since it will
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under the ground it will not take space above the ground.

In conclusion
, it is
widely
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accepted
that
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nobel
roads will definitely resolve a problem with
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traffic
jams;
however
, it is worth noting that this solution can not be
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used
in all
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cities
due to limitation on land space. It is imperative that the issue of
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traffic
be resolved
as
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soon
as possible to avoid the potential problematic outcomes to mankind that
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traffics
will bring. I believe that governmental authorities
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must
spend their budget on the construction of train lines and subways.
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IELTS essay Traffic congestion is a common problem with which contemporary governmental officials from different countries are dealing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
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