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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Traffic in the cities had become a big issue because of the massive population similarly, because of the vast masses the accommodation becomes a dilemma so some people suggest that relocating large factories to the countryside with their employees will solve this problem. I agree with removing large factories in the urban area but people should be supported by transportation facility. Big industries in the cites might create noise and pollution which depend on the type of production of the company rather than that it occupy the massive area and create traffic around the location due to their numerous worker might commute by their individual vehicles to travel to the company which unintentionally form a traffic jam, for instance, Pricol a multinational companey was creating huge traffic problems likewise occupied a large amount of land inside the city so few individuals filed a case against that company after few years with public prosecutor they common people win the case and judge demanded to shift the company with in 1 year after a year the traffic was reduced up to 80% around the location. To continue, People are paying 50% of their salary to accommodation. The place becomes expensive because of a shortage of lands. If gigantic companies move outside of the urban, there will be a drastic change in the rent price that people can afford it. the company space must be use to construct an affordable apartment. in Mumbai, a huge fight is going on at the present for place call Dharve, which is a slum in the city many business tycoons tried to capture this place but the people inside the area are resilient and opposing every offers because future generation should live in an affordable place. to sum up, traffic and accomodation can be solved by shifting massive factories and companies out side of the cites. employees commuting problem can be solved by providing a company transportation service such as a bus.

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Traffic
 in the cities had become a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 issue This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the massive population similarly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the vast masses the accommodation becomes a dilemma This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 suggest that relocating large factories to the countryside with their employees will solve this problem. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with removing large factories in the urban area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should be supported
 by transportation facility.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
Big
 industries in the cites might create noise and pollution which depend on the type of production of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
rather
 than that it occupy the massive area and create You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 around the location due to their numerous worker might commute by their individual vehicles to travel to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 which unintentionally
 form a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 jam, for instance
, Pricol a multinational companey was creating huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 problems likewise
 occupied a large amount of land inside the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 few individuals filed a case against that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 after few years with public prosecutor they common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 win the case and judge demanded to shift the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 with in 1 year after a year the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 up to 80% around the location.

To continue, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 are paying 50% of their salary to accommodation. The place becomes expensive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of a shortage of lands. If gigantic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 outside of the urban, there will be a drastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the rent price that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can afford it. the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to construct an affordable apartment. in Mumbai, a huge fight is going on at the present for place call Dharve, which is a slum in the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 business tycoons tried to capture this place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 inside the area are resilient and opposing every offers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 future generation should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in an affordable place.

to sum up, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 and accomodation can be solved
 by shifting massive factories and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 out side of the cites. employees commuting problem can be solved
 by providing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 transportation service such as a bus. 