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the tendency for human being to copy one into another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. agree or disagree

the tendency for human being to copy one into another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. agree or disagree 26KqX
Purchasing some of clothes and goods are always referring on the trending product which are currently popular. This afformentioned statement holds a valid point and i agree for some extent which i will elaborate in this essay, To begin, fashion is particularly showing beautiful of human creativity. Therefore, many of brands have sparked with very unique design which is absolutly attracting the people. The popular mode has been a immense pattern for the consumer to be followed. In term of marketing, they try to incorporate with the advertising that has collaborated with modern day-idol. In fact, the people intend for utilize the product. modern technology is applied in several item in order to persuade the customer about the product quality. For example, the new technology of sport clothes that allow to reduce the temperature while using. Finally, because of these has a beneficial the number of people recommend to wearing it. However, we can not to ignore that has adverse consequences appearing for those behavior. It is exactly leading to be more consumptive. They could, for instance, be shopaholic which is spending more money for new pattern of products, thus the people tend to be not be able for managing their finance. To illustrate, The number of modern technology has higher progressive in discovering a new product with very expensive price, furthermore, It disrupt our saving cashflow when we tend to consider those currently mode. Lastly, it is frequently said that expense allocated for following new product instantly drive a person to be an extravagant person. Conclusion, in my prespective, I personally believe that consumer of the popular brands in order to support our daily life and these has positive impact as long as the person has a financial ability.
Purchasing
After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the clothes") or simply say "some clothes".
some of clothes
and
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goods
are always referring on the trending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
which are
currently
popular. This
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afformentioned
statement holds a valid point and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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agree
for
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some
extent which
Did you mean "I"?
i
will elaborate in this essay,

To
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begin
, fashion is
particularly
showing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
of human creativity.
Therefore
,
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many
of brands have sparked with
Consider using "unique".
very unique
design which is
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absolutly
attracting the
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people
. The popular mode has been
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
immense pattern for the consumer to
be followed
. In term of marketing, they try to incorporate with the advertising that has collaborated with modern day-idol. In fact, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
intend for utilize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
modern
technology
is applied
in several item in order to persuade the customer about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
quality.
For example
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
technology of sport clothes that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the temperature while using.
Finally
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of these has a beneficial the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
recommend to wearing it.

However
, we can not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
that has adverse consequences appearing for
Did you mean "this behavior" or "those behaviors"?
those behavior
. It is exactly leading to be more consumptive. They could,
for instance
, be shopaholic which is spending more money for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
pattern of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
,
thus
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
tend to be not
Consider using a past participle here: "been".
be
able for managing their finance. To illustrate, The number of modern technology has higher progressive in discovering a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
expensive price,
furthermore
, It
Did you mean "disrupts"?
disrupt
our saving
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cashflow
when we tend to consider those
currently
mode.
Lastly
, it is
frequently
said that expense allocated for following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
instantly
drive a person to be an extravagant person.

Conclusion, in my
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prespective
, I
personally
believe that consumer of the popular brands in order to support our daily life and
The verb 'has' is singular. Did you mean: "This has" or "these have", "these haven"?
these has
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positive
impact as long as the person has a financial ability.
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IELTS essay the tendency for human being to copy one into another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. agree or disagree

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  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
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