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traditional books vs e-books

traditional books vs e-books 2r73b
Books, whether electronic or paper, have impacted positively on the readers and enriched them with sophisticated knowledge, for it provided them with experience and life lessons, not to mention the pleasure. And with the advancement and development of technology, books have been transformed into files that a reader can explore through computers, phones, or laptops. Some people believe that this was a huge leap to the future. Therefore, they encouraged it. While others declined such a step and consider it as a disgrace. There are undoubtedly merits and demerits for this evolutionary step. This essay will discuss both sides depending on various international resources. One evidence of the pros to read from electronic books is that it is easier to navigate for a certain page, especially if the novel is thick. Furthermore, it has no weight compared with a traditional book that sometimes weighs heavily. A study that was posted in The New York Magazine in 2015 found out that 96% of people who were addicted to reading preferred not to carry a novella or any kind of books in their bags due to the difficulty they faced holding it while walking. Besides, they asserted that looking for a certain part was faster than checking papers. Consequently, they thoroughly supported the invention of PDF files. On the other hand, reading from a real book seems less harmful according to those who suffer from eyes’ problems; they declared that e-books have countless negative effects on their eyes, especially those who wear glasses. A study by two German researchers confirmed their belief as they conducted an experiment on 150 people who wear eye contacts. They made them read daily from their phones. Consequently, they, the people, complained about different problems, and they ended up seeing an ophthalmologist. Therefore, the two researchers summarized their study by announcing their concerns of this trend. To sum up, From the arguments and examples given, it is no secret that reading form an e-book has perilous negative effects. Therefore, we should put away them for all the reasons aforementioned.
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Books
, whether electronic or paper, have impacted
positively
on the readers and enriched them with sophisticated knowledge, for it provided them with experience and life lessons, not to mention the pleasure. And with the advancement and development of technology,
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books
have
been transformed
into files that a reader can explore through computers, phones, or laptops.
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Some
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people
believe that this was a huge leap to the future.
Therefore
, they encouraged it. While others declined such a step and consider it as a disgrace. There are
undoubtedly
merits and demerits for this evolutionary step. This essay will discuss both sides depending on various international resources.

One evidence of the pros to read from electronic
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books
is that it is easier to navigate for a certain page,
especially
if the novel is thick.
Furthermore
, it has no weight compared with a traditional
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book
that
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sometimes
weighs
heavily
. A study that
was posted
in The New York Magazine in 2015 found out that 96% of
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people
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who
were addicted
to reading preferred not to carry a novella or any kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
in their bags due to the difficulty they faced holding it while walking.
Besides
, they asserted that looking for a certain part was faster than checking papers.
Consequently
, they
thoroughly
supported the invention of PDF files.

On the other hand
, reading from a real
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book
seems less harmful according to those
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who
suffer from eyes’ problems; they declared that e-books have countless
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negative
effects on their eyes,
especially
those
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who
wear glasses. A study by two German researchers confirmed their belief as they conducted an experiment on 150
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people
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who
wear eye contacts. They made them read daily from their phones.
Consequently
, they, the
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people
, complained about
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different
problems, and they ended up seeing an ophthalmologist.
Therefore
, the two researchers summarized their study by announcing their concerns of this trend.

To sum up, From the arguments and examples
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given
, it is no secret that reading
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form
an e-book has perilous
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negative
effects.
Therefore
, we should put away them for all the reasons aforementioned.
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IELTS essay traditional books vs e-books

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6.0
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