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The reading and the lecture are both about birds.

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The reading and the lecture are both about birds. The author of the reading presents three theories about why the bird population is decreasing. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading. His position is that now the bird population is increasing. According to the reading, homes, malls, and offices are being built by destroying the bird's natural habitat such as forests, wetlands and grasslands. Thus, the bird population is declining by not getting the proper habitat. The specific argument is challenged by the author. He claims that there are many types of bird, which prefer buildings as a habitat than trees. Therefore, the bird population is increasing instead of reducing. Secondly, the author suggests that birds' habitats are now converting into agricultural lands for meeting the increasing population's food demands. The lecturer, however, asserts that compared to past, now fewer lands are being used for the agricultural purpose. He goes on to say that modern science has increased the productivity of lands. So, fewer lands are producing more crops. Finally, the lecturer posits that now pesticides are less toxic than the past. Additionally, scientists have invented new crops which are pest restricted. As a result, no birds are now facing harm due to pesticides like before. This directly contradicts what the reading indicates.

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population
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, homes, malls, and offices are being built
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bird
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population
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. The specific argument is challenged
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habitat
 than trees. Therefore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
bird
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population
 is increasing instead
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Secondly
, the author suggests that birds' habitats are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 converting into agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
 for meeting the increasing population's food demands. The lecturer, however
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now
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lands
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So
, fewer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
 are producing more crops.

Finally
, the lecturer posits that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
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 pesticides are less toxic than the past. Additionally
, scientists have invented new crops which are pest restricted. As a result
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birds
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now
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