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TPO 6 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

TPO 6 Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
In today' s world technology made our lives easy and comfortable. We can access any information from the world within a minutes. Technology made our commute faster and comfortable. Some people would belives that today' s life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children, others would disagree. In my view, today' s life is easier than before for many reasons. First of all, Because of good transportation, our work has done much faster than before. Many flights, trains, subways and most of the people own a car this facility made our life easier and we can finish our work fast. For example, My brother owns spices business, he does business with many countries and he has to travel very often. Most of the time he takes flight to travel the USA, UK, France, even though this country is far from our home country India, his work done in two to three days it is because he takes flights. He doesn' t have to waste his time on long hectic transportation. I remember my grandfather was doing business in there a time he uses to stay out of home for a couple of months because at that time we didn' t have good transportation services. This example clearly explains that today' s life is much easier and comfortable because of the advanced transportation system. Second, we can access any information from the internet and we can do our work. There is much information available on the internet regarding which medication to use when you have a cough, knowledge about how to fix a car, how to fix a cell phone, etc. This infrmation is helpful to finish our work. For instance, my sister had stomach pain in the middle of the night. I did try to contact the doctor' s office but everything was closed. So I started to research online regarding stomach pain and I found plenty of information which was very helpful. I gave stomach pain medication and she was feeling better, she was able to sleep in the night. It was possible due to technology. This example clearly explains that the internet made our lives easier and we can do our work. In sum, though some may not agree, life today is easier and comfortable. Not only today we can do our work faster but also we can excess many information, which made our lives more luxurious. I strongly believe that today' s life is much easier and comfortable.
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lives
easy and
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comfortable
. We can access any
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information
from the world within
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a minutes
. Technology made our commute faster and
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comfortable
.
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people
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belives
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today&
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life
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easier
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comfortable
than it was when our grandparents were children, others would disagree. In my view,
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today&
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life
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easier
than
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before
for
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many
reasons.

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First of all
,
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of
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good
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transportation
, our
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work
has done
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much
faster than
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before
.
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flights, trains, subways and most of the
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people
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own
a car this facility made our
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life
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easier and
we can finish our
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work
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fast
.
For example
, My brother
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owns
spices business, he does business with
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many
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countries and
he
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has to
travel
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very
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often
. Most of the
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time
he takes flight to travel the USA, UK, France,
even though
this country is far from our home country India, his
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work
done in two to three days it is
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because
he takes flights. He
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doesn&
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have to
waste his
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time
on long hectic
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transportation
. I remember my grandfather was doing business in there a
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time
he
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uses
to stay out of home for a couple of months
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because
at that
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time
we
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didn&
#039; t have
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good
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transportation
services. This example
clearly
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explains
that
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today&
#039; s
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life
is
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much
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easier
and
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comfortable
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because
of the advanced
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transportation
system.

Second, we can access any
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information
from the
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internet and
we can do our
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work
. There is
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much
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information
available on the internet regarding which medication to
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use
when you have a cough, knowledge about how to
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fix
a car, how to
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fix
a cell phone, etc. This
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infrmation
is helpful to finish our
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work
.
For instance
, my sister had stomach pain in the middle of the night. I did try to contact the
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doctor&
#039; s office
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but
everything
was closed
.
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So
I
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started
to research online regarding stomach pain and I found
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plenty
of
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information
which was
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very
helpful. I gave stomach pain
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medication and
she was feeling better, she was able to sleep in the night. It was possible due to technology. This example
clearly
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explains
that the internet made our
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lives
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easier and
we can do our work.

In sum, though
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some
may not
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agree
,
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life
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today
is
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easier
and
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comfortable
. Not
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only
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today
we can do our
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work
faster
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but
also
we
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can excess
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many
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information
, which made our
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lives
more luxurious. I
strongly
believe that
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life
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easier
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comfortable
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
49Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes
One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay TPO 6 Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
417 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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