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TPO 41-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.4

TPO 41- Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4
By improving civilization human always try to learn new thing to promote quality of their lives. Thus, they have been learning from each other. For instance, learning hunting of animals, make fire and so on. We know who someone teaches everything to others as called teacher and he or she is as a cornerstone of knowledge also this person is very precious for every society. In the past, teachers were more respected by others and society. Inversely, today they have less value than the past unfortunately. I am greatly convinced that instructors were more valued by others and cultures in the past which will be discussed broadly here under. First, in the past time, many teachers had a high position among people. They always had good place in their hometown and their society. As a matter of fact, some people believe that they were as same as doctors and some groups supposed that they were angel of insight. As far as I can remember “my grandfather said my instructor was my life and as he said I carried out while my parents sometimes were diverged from them”. Therefore, many people assume that teachers had sensitive and significant tasks as if they were goddess of save. Furthermore, they could understand many people need to them and they did not abuse from people and their conditions. Second, another worth thing mentioning is that, they had one job and their time was allocated to teaching others and they did not do anything. Notwithstanding, they sometimes carried out their personal and daily. As it can be easily seen, when people watched their life could realize teachers were devoted their life to indoctrinate them. Thereby, their value more improved day by day. Unfortunately, today, many teachers are compelled to more job except to main job which this reason maybe sharply reduce education quality. Therefore, one reason that teachers have less respect than the past can be reason. Last but not least, without any shadow of doubt, teachers have a valuable job which is teaching useful knowledge to others and eventually every society and culture have to respect them because they are foundation of awareness in each culture and society. Therefore, maybe their value and tribute is fluctuated by time but they always respectable group among people. In addition, when they are satisfied with society they can be strongly effective in society’s condition. To put it in a nutshell, some people believe that teachers more appreciated by people in the past and others have negative attitude. I cast light on first group for it is mentioned above and I assume that in the past time teachers were more respected and they had been an apex in the society.
By improving civilization human always try to learn new thing to promote quality of their
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lives
.
Thus
, they have been learning from each
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other
.
For instance
, learning
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hunting
of animals,
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make
fire and
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so
on. We know who someone teaches everything to others as called
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teacher and
he or she is as a cornerstone of knowledge
also
this person is
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very
precious for every
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society
. In the
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past
,
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teachers
were more respected by others and
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society
.
Inversely
,
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today
they have less value than the
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past
unfortunately. I am
greatly
convinced that instructors were more valued by others and cultures in the
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past
which will
be discussed
broadly
here under.

First
, in the
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past
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time
,
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many
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teachers
had a high position among
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people
. They always had
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good
place in their hometown and their
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society
. As a matter of fact,
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some
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people
believe that they were as same as doctors and
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some
groups supposed that they were angel of insight. As far as I can remember “my grandfather said my instructor was my life and as he said I carried out while my parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
were diverged
from them”.
Therefore
,
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many
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people
assume that
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teachers
had sensitive and significant tasks as if they were goddess of save.
Furthermore
, they could understand
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many
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people
need to
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them and
they did not abuse from
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people
and their conditions.

Second, another worth thing mentioning is that, they had one
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job
and their
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time
was allocated
to teaching
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others and
they did not do anything. Notwithstanding, they
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sometimes
carried out their personal and daily. As it can be
easily
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seen
, when
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people
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watched
their life could realize
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teachers
were devoted
their life to indoctrinate them. Thereby, their value more
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improved
day by day. Unfortunately,
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today
,
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many
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teachers
are compelled
to more
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job
except to main
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job
which this reason maybe
sharply
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reduce
education quality.
Therefore
, one reason that
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teachers
have less respect than the
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past
can be reason.

Last
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but
not least, without any shadow of doubt,
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teachers
have a valuable
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job
which is teaching useful knowledge to others and
eventually
every
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society
and culture
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have to
respect them
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because
they are foundation of awareness in each culture and
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society
.
Therefore
, maybe their value and tribute
is fluctuated
by
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time
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but
they always respectable group among
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people
.
In addition
, when they
are satisfied
with
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society
they can be
strongly
effective in
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society’s
condition.

To put it in a nutshell,
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some
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people
believe that
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teachers
more appreciated by
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people
in the
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past
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and others
have
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negative
attitude. I cast light on
first
group for it
is mentioned
above and I assume that in the
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past
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time
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teachers
were more
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respected and
they had been an apex in the
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society
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay TPO 41- Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
452 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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