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TPO-37- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money. Use specific reasons and example v.1

TPO-37- Independent Writing Task Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money. Use specific reasons and example v. 1
In the modern era of globalization, Vernacular is an imperative requisite, and myriad of languages are vanishing each year. It is generally postulated that minimal languages in the world furnishes mankind's life flourish. I partially concur with the statement and the essay elucidates my view and perception behind the notion. A plethora of elements encouraging the prospect of reducing numerous languages. Common and foremost, It is convenient for millennials understand and converse their opinions. Subsequently, Speaking in common tongue, mitigates communication barriers between masses from different geographic regions. In addition, dominantly in business enterprises communication drawback will be simplified. For instance, Developed economies are considering English as a common dialect, hence citizen's can easily migrate anywhere to the English speaking nations as they would be easy to negotiate. On the contrary, there are certain aspects to promote local languages. Primarily, Mother tongue is salient for each individual and languages is only a medium of transferring ideas and expressions. Consequently, there are common languages between states, but conveying thoughts in own native speaking style make people more comfortable. Moreover, native languages aid to generation aware about the ancient histories and connects with the societal culture. To cite a reference, As we all know Tamil is the mother of all languages, how far the technology develops and British tongue gestures, the reality of history cannot be hidden. To recapitulate, It is pivotal for the entire society to learn country language without disregarding mother tongue. Electoral bodies and bureaucrats has to take necessary actions to ensure people study corporate language and native language from preschool onwards, will give a supplementary boost to each individual and helps to live a prosperous life.
In the modern era of globalization, Vernacular is an imperative requisite, and myriad of
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languages
are vanishing each year. It is
generally
postulated that minimal
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languages
in the world furnishes mankind's life flourish. I
partially
concur with the statement and the essay elucidates my view and perception behind the notion.

A plethora of elements encouraging the prospect of reducing numerous
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languages
.
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Common
and foremost, It is convenient for millennials understand and converse their opinions.
Subsequently
, Speaking in
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common
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tongue
, mitigates communication barriers between masses from
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different
geographic regions.
In addition
,
dominantly
in business
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enterprises
communication drawback will
be simplified
.
For instance
, Developed economies are considering English as a
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common
dialect,
hence
citizen's can
easily
migrate anywhere to the
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
nations as they would be easy to negotiate.

On the contrary
, there are certain aspects to promote local
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languages
.
Primarily
, Mother
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tongue
is salient for each individual and
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languages
is
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only
a medium of transferring
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ideas
and expressions.
Consequently
, there are
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common
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languages
between states,
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but
conveying thoughts in
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own
native speaking style
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make
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people
more comfortable.
Moreover
, native
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languages
aid to generation aware about the ancient histories and connects with the societal culture. To cite a reference, As we all know Tamil is the mother of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
, how far the technology develops and British
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
gestures, the reality of history cannot
be hidden
.

To recapitulate, It is pivotal for the entire society to learn country
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language
without disregarding mother
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
. Electoral bodies and bureaucrats
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has to
take necessary actions to ensure
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
study corporate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
from preschool onwards, will give a supplementary boost to each individual and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a prosperous life.
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IELTS essay TPO-37- Independent Writing Task Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money. Use specific reasons and example v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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