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tpo 21

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The material discusses the concept of genetic modified trees' benefits. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. Fistly, the reading details specific point regarding this topic, namely genetic modified trees could survive better, because they could resist particular conditions. Next, genetic modified tress have finacial benefits. Finally, genetic modified trees could grow fast, so they could prevent the ove making use the wild trees. Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is typically unmodifoed trees are diveres, so if they are exposed to certain condition, some could affected, but at least some individual are resistant to this condition. However, genetic modiified trees are uniform, if they face particular condition that they have not been desigened for, they all will be wiped out. In addition to that, genetic modified trees have a hidden cost, not only because companies charged farmerd more when they plant modified tress; but also, by law farmers shoud pay companies every time they grow modified seeds. One final point, genetic modified trees could damage wild trees, given that they grow aggresively, so they compete with natural wild trees for natural resourses, such as sunlight, soil nutrients and water. As a result, they could harm them.
The material discusses the concept of
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genetic
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modified
trees' benefits. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain
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points
outlined in the reading passage.

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Fistly
, the reading
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details
specific
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point
regarding this topic,
namely
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genetic
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modified
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trees
could survive better,
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because
they could resist particular conditions.
Next
,
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genetic
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modified
tress have
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finacial
benefits.
Finally
,
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genetic
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modified
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trees
could grow
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fast
,
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so
they could
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prevent
the
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ove
making
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use
the wild trees.

Conversely
, the listening challenges the
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points
, one specific contradiction is
typically
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unmodifoed
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trees
are
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diveres
,
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so
if they
are exposed
to certain
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condition
,
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some
could
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affected
,
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but
at least
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some
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individual
are resistant to this
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condition
.
However
,
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genetic
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modiified
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trees
are uniform, if they face particular
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condition
that they have not been
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desigened
for, they all will
be wiped
out.
In addition
to that,
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genetic
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modified
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trees
have a hidden cost, not
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only
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because
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companies
charged
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farmerd
more when they plant
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modified
tress;
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but
also
, by law farmers
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shoud
pay
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companies
every time they grow
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modified
seeds. One final
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point
,
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genetic
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modified
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trees
could damage wild
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trees
,
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given
that they grow
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aggresively
,
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so
they compete with natural wild
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trees
for natural
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resourses
, such as sunlight, soil nutrients and water.
As a result
, they could harm them.
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IELTS essay tpo 21

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
213 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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