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The material discusses the existing of bees as early as 200 million years ago.

The material discusses the existing of bees as early as 200 million years ago. PVn6K

The material discusses the existing of bees as early as 200 million years ago. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely there are no bees' fossils dated back to 200 million years. Next, 200 million years ago there were no flowering plants, and there is a close relationship between them and bees. Finally, the resemble bee nests lack special caps. Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction, no bees' fossils remain because they could not be preserved. bees are reserved by using the sticky liquid from resin trees, 200 million years ago these trees were rare and they started to be common latter. As a result, the absence of fossils does not mean that bees did not exist, but there were no trees that could produce the right kind of resin. In addition to that, early bees might feed on other plants, such as pine trees, then after flower plants were evolved, bees started to adapt to them. One final point, bees built chambers and use special waterproof materials with a distinctive chemical composition, when they examined the nest chambers, they found that they have the same chemicals used by modern bees.

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