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TPO 2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v.2

TPO 2: Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 2
It has been always a disputable issue whether we should consider telling the truth as the most significant subject in our relationships or not and it has caused heated debates over a long period of time because it affects everybody in his or her life. Although many people think that there are a lot more important considerations, if I am supposed to write about this issue I will definitely mark it as the most important consideration due to several reasons. The first point that I would like to make is the fact that it has a direct relationship with the reliability of the person. A trustworthy person is who any one can count on him or her and take his or her advice into account and this characteristic can be affected by lying. For example, suppose your brother is telling a lie behind your back when he thinks that you have left the place and actually you are there. He can never be trusted anymore. Can he? Another aspect of this issue and perhaps the most significant reason is the fact that telling a single lie leads to many future lies and there is always a spot that it will be revealed and its feel of shame and regret in front of others can’t be neglected. For instance, imagine that you have told your father that you will go to the library to study but actually you have hung out with your friends. This first lie leads to more lies about subjects like the book that you' ve studied, closing time of the library, delay of the bus and so on. Assume that you have forgotten one of your imaginary answers. What about feeling of embarrassment? The final part refers to something may be vital for some people due to special reasons that the other one can' t really understand it thoroughly. In this case, a mere lie can lead to a disaster or make a total change in the person' s destiny. In conclusion, there are many reasons answering why telling the truth is the most important consideration such as its relationship with reliability, important issues, and its future. So, if we want to evaluate a person ethically we should pay attention to this characteristic.
It has been always a disputable
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issue
whether we should consider
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telling
the truth as the most significant subject in our relationships or not and it has caused heated debates over a long period of time
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because
it affects everybody in
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his or her
life. Although
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many
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people
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think
that there are a lot more
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important
considerations, if I
am supposed
to write about this
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issue
I will definitely mark it as the most
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important
consideration due to several reasons.

The
first
point that I would like to
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make
is the fact that it has a direct relationship with the reliability of the
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person
. A trustworthy
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person
is who
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any one
can count on him or her and take
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his or her
advice into account and this characteristic can be
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affected
by lying.
For example
, suppose your brother is
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telling
a
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lie
behind your back when he
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thinks
that you have
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left
the place and actually you are there. He can never
be trusted
anymore. Can he?

Another aspect of this
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issue
and perhaps the most significant reason is the fact that
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telling
a single
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lie
leads to
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many
future lies and there is always a spot that it will
be revealed
and its feel of shame and regret in front of others can’t
be neglected
.
For instance
, imagine that you have
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told
your father that you will go to the library to study
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but
actually you have hung out with your friends. This
first
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lie
leads to more lies about subjects like the book that
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you&
#039; ve studied, closing time of the library, delay of the bus and
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on. Assume that you have forgotten one of your imaginary answers. What about feeling of embarrassment?

The final part refers to something may be vital for
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some
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people
due to special reasons that the other one
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can&
#039; t
really
understand it
thoroughly
.
In this case
, a mere
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lie
can lead to a disaster or
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make
a total
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change
in the
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person&
#039; s destiny.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
reasons answering why
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telling
the truth is the most
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important
consideration such as its relationship with reliability,
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important
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issues
, and its future.
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So, if
we want to evaluate a
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person
ethically
we should pay attention to this characteristic.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 2: Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
376 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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