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Tourism is one of the fastes growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can couse to local cultures and the environment is often ignored To what extent do you agree or disagree

Tourism is one of the fastes growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can couse to local cultures and the environment is often ignored b9P6
Undoubtedly, tourism is one of the best incomes for economy as well as it distributs to the industry around the world. However, the ignorance of tourism damage to local culture and environment is obvious. I agree with this view point. On the other hand, tourism is often ignored by international travelers this is because when tourists vist to a country, translators and bus drivers always help them that this couse usually observed by them and many toursts tortured the guides, more and more questions they give to the guides in addition, 70% of tourists always search the guides. Therafter, visitors are not know the history of a country and other instance for example locations of hotels and hostels, and museums Moreover, tourism is a main reason for eco -pollution because tourists are throwing the rubbish on the street as well as to the museum and any visitors can not follow the discipline and disordered. Despite the arguments above, tourism is a great system around the world since it is a best way for a country it is also invite the jobs for example, management, guide, bus and taxi drivers. There is no doubt, tourism is not stopping business in every season. Therefore, many countries main economy is a tourism for example, western countries namely UAE, SWITZERLAND, ICELAND as an example because these country's basically attention is tourism provided that a million of people are visiting there since these countries nature is a wonderful and we can see the high rise building and it is existing moments for us. To conclude, although tourism is so useful and helpful for a local people and the economy. I think tourism has disadvantage and advantage side however, tourism is a big damage to local culture and environment this is because some people ignored to this reason
Undoubtedly
,
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tourism
is one of the best incomes for economy
as well
as it
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distributs
to the industry around the world.
However
, the ignorance of
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tourism
damage to local culture and environment is obvious. I
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agree
with this view point.

On the other hand
,
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tourism
is
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often
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ignored
by international travelers this is
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because
when tourists
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vist
to a
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country
, translators and bus drivers always
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help
them that this
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couse
usually
observed by them and
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many
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toursts
tortured the
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guides
, more and more questions they give to the
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guides
in addition
, 70% of tourists always search the
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guides
.
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Therafter
, visitors are not know the history of a
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country
and other instance for
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example
locations of hotels and hostels, and museums
Moreover
,
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tourism
is a main reason for
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eco
-pollution
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because
tourists are throwing the rubbish on the street
as well
as to the museum and any visitors can not follow the discipline and disordered.

Despite the arguments above,
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tourism
is a great system around the world since it is
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a
best way for a
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country
it is
also
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invite
the jobs for
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example
, management,
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guide
, bus and taxi drivers. There is no doubt,
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tourism
is not stopping business in every season.
Therefore
,
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many
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countries
main economy is a
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tourism
for
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example
, western
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countries
namely
UAE, SWITZERLAND, ICELAND as an
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example
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because
these
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country's
basically
attention is
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tourism
provided that a million of
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people
are visiting there since these
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countries
nature is a
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wonderful and
we can
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see
the high rise building and it is existing moments for us.

To conclude
, although
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tourism
is
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so
useful and helpful for a local
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people
and the economy. I
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think
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tourism
has disadvantage and advantage side
however
,
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tourism
is a
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big
damage to local culture and environment this is
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because
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some
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people
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ignored
to this
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reason
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IELTS essay Tourism is one of the fastes growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can couse to local cultures and the environment is often ignored

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