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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? R3x8
Waste is one of the key issues every country faces in day-to-day lives. Disposal is not done in an appropriate way. Negligence towards waste and garbage is high in the society. Over the time people's wants has increased consequently the production of many items has increased too. Although the goods are produced more, wastes are also produced inevitably. Government is responsible by imposing strict laws and regulations. Firstly, Human needs are increased therefore manufacturing of goods has reached the top level. Rubbish are produced more by the manufacturing industries. Most of them are only keen on earning profits while they show very little interest towards the waste produced. In order to increase to the production, industries use raw materials which produces high waste and some time is harmful too. For instance: Dyeing companies use many chemicals as a raw material and the waste produced cannot re-used again. Unless companies design or plan to reuse the materials, the production of waste cannot be minimised Secondly, Government needs to take this issue very seriously and have to work consciously to reduce the production of waste. Though there are laws in waste disposal, it is very important that to build regulations on waste productions too. Heavy taxes and fines needs to be imposed on industries those who produce lot of rubbish. In addition government can also set up council or governing bodies based on the industry set up to overlook on this issue. To conclude, Unless organizations plan on re-using and re-cycling of the waste, this issue will not be resolved. Government should make sure that the rubbish produced at minimum by the help of strict regulations and by constructing a governing body so that waste would not affect any of our resources.
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Waste
is one of the key issues every country faces in day-to-day
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lives
. Disposal is not done
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in an appropriate way
. Negligence towards
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waste
and garbage is high in the society. Over the time
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people
's wants has increased
consequently
the
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production
of
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many
items has increased too. Although the
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goods
are
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produced
more,
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wastes
are
also
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produced
inevitably
.
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Government
is responsible by imposing strict laws and regulations.

Firstly
, Human needs
are increased
therefore
manufacturing of
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goods
has reached the
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top level
. Rubbish are
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produced
more by the manufacturing
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industries
. Most of them are
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only
keen on earning profits while they
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show
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very
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little
interest towards the
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waste
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produced
. In order to increase to the
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production
,
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industries
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use
raw materials which produces high
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waste
and
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some
time is harmful too.
For instance
: Dyeing
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companies
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use
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many
chemicals as a raw material and the
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waste
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produced
cannot re-
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used
again. Unless
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companies
design or plan to reuse the materials, the
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production
of
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waste
cannot be
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minimised


Secondly
,
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Government
needs to take this issue
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very
seriously
and
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have to
work
consciously
to
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reduce
the
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production
of
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waste
. Though there are laws in
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waste
disposal, it is
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very
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important
that to build regulations on
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waste
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productions
too. Heavy taxes and fines needs to
be imposed
on
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industries
those who produce lot of rubbish. In
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addition
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government
can
also
set up council or governing bodies based on the
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industry
set up to overlook on this issue.

To conclude
, Unless organizations plan on re-using and re-cycling of the
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waste
, this issue will not
be resolved
.
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Government
should
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make
sure that the rubbish
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produced
at minimum by the
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help
of strict regulations and by constructing a governing body
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so
that
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waste
would not affect any of our resources.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
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