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Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions.

Over the years, tourism industry has gained worldwide popularity. Carelessness in the behavior of the visitors and the construction of roads in the mountains are some of the potential causes of environmental damage which can be tackled by taking suitable measures. A main cause of environmental problem is the throwing away of waste at any place. Tourists, while travelling throw plastic bags and plastic water bottles at any random places instead of dumping it into the garbage bins. The accumulation of non-biodegradable waste, for instance, has been causing the water pollution, and death of many marine animals due to choking in Goa. Another cause of environmental problem due to booming tourism industry is deforestation. This can be attributed to the fact that the construction of roads in the mountainous areas requires the cutting down of trees at a massive scale in order to make the travel convenient. In this way, the depletion of the forest cover is giving birth to many issues like air, noise pollution, and global warming is the consequence. Nevertheless, there are number of ways to tackle the rise of these harmful environmental effects. The first and foremost one is that government should impose heavy fine on the tourists, who are littering waste here and there. As a result, would force people to abide by laws. Furthermore, it is an undeniable that the progression of tourism is not going to halt in the near future, the only way to revert the damage is to plant more and more trees. This would enhance the quality of air we breathe in, and can minimize the levels of air pollution and the rising temperature. Therefore, with the combined efforts of the government and individuals, when adhere to strict rules and regulations, tourist sector can be turned into a boon for the country. In conclusion, despite the damages caused by the tourism industry such as depleting the quality of breathable air and the rise in temperature, the same can be curbed by the regulating authorities by adhering to strict measures of promoting afforestation, by making rules regarding littering.
Over the years,
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tourism
industry has gained worldwide popularity. Carelessness in the behavior of the visitors and the construction of roads in the mountains are
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some of the
potential causes of
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environmental
damage which can
be tackled
by taking suitable measures.

A main cause of
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environmental
problem is the throwing away of waste at any place. Tourists, while travelling throw plastic bags and plastic water bottles at any random places
instead
of dumping it into the garbage bins. The accumulation of non-biodegradable waste,
for instance
, has been causing the water pollution, and death of
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many
marine animals due to choking in Goa. Another cause of
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environmental
problem due to booming
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tourism
industry is deforestation. This can
be attributed
to the fact that the construction of roads in the mountainous areas requires the cutting down of trees at a massive scale in order to
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make
the travel convenient. In this way, the depletion of the forest cover is giving birth to
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many
issues like
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air
, noise pollution, and global warming is the consequence.

Nevertheless
, there are number of ways to tackle the rise of these harmful
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environmental
effects. The
first
and foremost one is that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should impose heavy fine on the tourists, who are littering waste here and there.
As a result
, would force
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to abide by laws.
Furthermore
, it is an undeniable that the progression of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourism
is not going to halt in the near future, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to revert the damage is to plant more and more trees. This would enhance the quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
we breathe in, and can minimize the levels of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
pollution and the rising temperature.
Therefore
, with the combined efforts of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and individuals, when adhere to strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations, tourist sector can
be turned
into a boon for the country.

In conclusion
, despite the damages caused by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourism
industry such as depleting the quality of breathable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
and the rise in temperature, the same can
be curbed
by the regulating authorities by adhering to strict measures of promoting afforestation, by making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
regarding littering.
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IELTS essay Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions.

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