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Tourism has negative impact on environment off tourist places. What are these impacts? How this problem can be solved?

Tourism has negative impact on environment off tourist places. What are these impacts? How this problem can be solved? 1oOGM
No one can deny that due to modernization there is an incline in tourism. consequently, massive impacts can be seen on number of tourist places. It can be decreased by following some steps. To commence with, the most highlighted impact which everyone is familiar to, is tourists or damaging local environment of such places by throwing garbage on footpaths, roads and fields. Sometimes marks of split can be seen also on historical monuments, which make the environment and beauty of that places worse. For an instance, a survey was conducted by some professionals on a beach and the result were unbelievable. It was studied the most of their waste in the sea comes from beaches because of tourist only. However, there are some solutions and steps, with which these problems can be solved. First and foremost, government should take few bold steps like implementing new rules in tourists places for protecting environment and fines should be charged if someone disobey that. Secondly cctv cameras should be installed to keep an eye on each and every tourist visiting these type of places. However, this is not enough, public should also become aware because if they will follow these steps properly Hence, no one can harm these properties. To Conclude, there are plethora of activities by which environment is being harmed but knowing the reason of this and start working on it to solve these problems may protect environment and historical places. Humans are brilliant creatures of the universe if they can destroy, they can protect too.
No one can deny that due to modernization there is an incline in tourism.
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consequently
, massive impacts can be
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seen
on number of
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tourist
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places
. It can
be decreased
by following
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some
steps.

To commence with, the most highlighted impact which everyone is familiar to, is
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tourists
or damaging local
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environment
of such
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places
by throwing garbage on footpaths, roads and fields.
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Sometimes
marks of split can be
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seen
also
on historical monuments, which
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make
the
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environment
and beauty of that
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places
worse. For an instance, a survey
was conducted
by
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some
professionals on a beach and the result were unbelievable. It
was studied
the most of their waste in the sea
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comes
from beaches
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of
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tourist
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only
.

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, there are
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some
solutions and steps, with which these problems can
be solved
.
First
and foremost,
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government
should take few bold steps like implementing new
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rules
in
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tourists
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places
for protecting
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environment
and fines should
be charged
if someone
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disobey
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cameras should
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keep
an eye on each and every
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tourist
visiting these type of
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places
.
However
, this is not
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enough
, public should
also
become aware
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if they will follow these steps
properly
Hence
, no one can harm these properties.

To Conclude
, there are plethora of activities by which
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environment
is
being harmed
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but
knowing the reason of this and
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start
working on it to solve these problems may protect
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environment
and historical
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places
. Humans are brilliant creatures of the universe if they can
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destroy
, they can protect too.
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IELTS essay Tourism has negative impact on environment off tourist places. What are these impacts? How this problem can be solved?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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