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The illustration demonstrates the process by which tomato ketchup is made. There are 15 steps in the process, from picking and putting tomatoes in basket to eating with hamburger and fries. The first step is that tomatoes are picked and are put into basket and they are sorted into good and bad tomatoes. Once they have been sorted, they are then sent to factory. Next stalk, seeds and skin are removed from tomatoes. After that they are put into container in order to crush. Once tomatoes have been crushed, sugar, vinegar and salt are then added to give extra flavor. Then they are boiled together. Having left in the container for two hours after boiling, bottles are poured with ketchup. The following step is that the bottles of ketchup are labelled and then the quality of ketchup is controlled. Having been checked the bottles are packed into boxes in order to deliver supermarkets by lorry. The final step is that you can eat ketchup with hamburger and fries.

The illustration demonstrates the process by which tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is made
. There are 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 in the process, from picking and putting tomatoes in basket to eating with hamburger and fries.

The first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that tomatoes are picked
 and are put
 into Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).basket, and
basket and
 they are sorted
 into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 tomatoes. Once they have been sorted
, they are then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to factory. Next
 stalk, seeds and skin are removed
 from tomatoes. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that they are put
 into container in order to crush. Once tomatoes have been crushed
, sugar, vinegar and salt are then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to give extra flavor. Then they are boiled
 together. Having This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in the container for two hours after boiling, bottles are poured
 with ketchup.

The following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that the bottles of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
are labelled
 and then the quality of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is controlled
. Having been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 the bottles are packed
 into boxes in order to deliver supermarkets by lorry. The final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that you can eat You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 with hamburger and fries. 