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now days many people choose to be self empolyed, rather that work for company

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Irrefutably, in contemporary era due to digitalisation number of people are choose to self-employed instead of employee of any organisation. This essay would shed light on cause of this with it demerits with valid standpoints in forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, There are plethora of reason behind this trend. Firstly, government supports this trend by providing financial support for creating jobs, owing to which people are ecourage to to start their own businesses. Secondly, nowadays bank loans are easy to get with minimum mortgage. This aids the new entrepreneur for establish their compay. Last but not least, internet make us connected, owing to which people are now doing freelancing and provide their service to all around the world by just working on their computer. For instance, research of Oxford University, it is stated that, in India there is 15% people who are in tech domain are working freelance. Nevertheless, There are numerous demerits of being self-employed. First of all, there is no security in terms of income. To exemplify it, having fixed salary job is preferred by many people has its give self relaxation that every month they are going to get paid. Whereas, business man have no guarantee of income. What is next, entrepreneurship means having responsibility of everything, Owing to which people have to work more in order to get success. To conclude, This essay ten reiterate that everything has it own significance, nothing can be ignored. Although it has a number of disadvantages, there are many successful business man stories which can be manifested the reason behind this trend.
Irrefutably
, in contemporary era due to
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digitalisation
number of
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people
are choose to self-employed
instead
of employee of any
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organisation
. This essay would shed light on cause of this with it demerits with valid standpoints in forthcoming paragraph.

To commence with, There are plethora of reason behind this trend.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
supports this trend by providing financial support for creating jobs, owing to which
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people
are
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ecourage
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to to
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start
their
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own
businesses.
Secondly
, nowadays bank loans are easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
with minimum mortgage. This aids the new entrepreneur for establish their
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compay
. Last
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but
not least, internet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
us connected, owing to which
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people
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going freelancing".
doing freelancing
and provide their service to all around the world by
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just
working on their computer.
For instance
, research of Oxford University, it
is stated
that, in India there is 15%
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people
who are in tech domain are working freelance.

Nevertheless
, There are numerous demerits of being self-employed.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, there is no security in terms of income. To exemplify it, having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
salary job
is preferred
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
has
its give self relaxation that every month they are going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
paid.
“Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, business
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man
have no guarantee of income. What is
next
, entrepreneurship means having responsibility of everything, Owing to which
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people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work more in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
success.

To conclude
, This essay ten reiterate that everything has it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
significance, nothing can be
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ignored
. Although it has a number of disadvantages, there are
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many
successful business
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man
stories which can
be manifested
the reason behind this trend.
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IELTS essay now days many people choose to be self empolyed, rather that work for company

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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