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Tourism has negative environmental impacts on tourist areas. What are these impacts? How can damaging impacts be lessened? v.5

Tourism has negative environmental impacts on tourist areas. What are these impacts? How can damaging impacts be lessened? v. 5
In the modern society, the problem of protecting the environment is very acute. Many species have been lost as a result of human impact on the environment. This essay will discuss the main causes associated with tourism influence on the ecosystem and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. The main problems caused by the tourism are pollution and overexploitation of resources. Environmental pollution negatively affects on tourist areas and makes it unsuitable for life. Pollution affects factors such as the chemical structure of the environment and climate. For example, as a result of pollution of the river, some species of fish have died out. Another big problem is overexploitation of resources. Unlimited use of resources and excessive building needed by tourism industry could destroy natural habitats and even may result in the extinction of many animals and plants. For example, a large tourist flow may lead to water shortages on tourist areas. In my opinion, the best solutions to these problems are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws. Creation of protected areas can stop overexploitation of resources. For example, in the reserves people saved species in conditions of their natural habitat. I think that the other good idea is introducing new laws for protection tourist areas. For example, high fines for rubbish. In conclusion, it can be said that we have problems with touristic impacts because of negative human effect on the environment. In my opinion, the best solutions to these problems are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws.
In the modern society, the
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problem
of protecting the
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environment
is
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very
acute.
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Many
species have
been lost
as a result
of human impact on the
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environment
. This essay will discuss the main causes associated with tourism influence on the ecosystem and propose
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some
possible solutions to avoid them.

The main
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problems
caused by the tourism are
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pollution
and overexploitation of resources. Environmental
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pollution
negatively
affects on
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tourist
areas and
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makes
it unsuitable for life.
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Pollution
affects factors such as the chemical structure of the
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environment
and climate. For
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example
,
as a result
of
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pollution
of the river,
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some
species of fish have
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died
out. Another
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big
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problem
is overexploitation of resources. Unlimited
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use
of resources and excessive building needed by tourism industry could
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destroy
natural habitats and even may result in the extinction of
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many
animals and plants. For
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example
, a large
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tourist
flow may lead to water shortages on
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tourist
areas.

In my opinion, the best solutions to these
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problems
are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws. Creation of protected areas can
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stop
overexploitation of resources. For
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example
, in the reserves
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people
saved species in conditions of their natural habitat. I
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think
that the other
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good
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idea
is introducing new laws for protection
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tourist
areas. For
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example
, high fines for rubbish.

In conclusion
, it can
be said
that we have
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problems
with touristic impacts
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because
of
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negative
human effect on the
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environment
. In my opinion, the best solutions to these
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problems
are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Tourism has negative environmental impacts on tourist areas. What are these impacts? How can damaging impacts be lessened? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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