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i have many different hobbies and interests such as computer gaming cycling and painting but myfavourite is ice hockey. Its a very popular sport in my home country of Canada. I practise every Saturday morning a tour local sports centre with my team and we play matches once a month We love to winYou have to use a. when it's the first letter of a sentence; with names of people, places and countries; with days of the week and months; and with people's titles.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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different
hobbies

and interests such as computer

gaming cycling and painting
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but


Possible spelling mistake found.
myfavourite
is ice hockey.
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
a

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular sport in my home

country of Canada. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.
practise


every Saturday morning a tour

local sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
team and
we play matches once a month

We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
winYou
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a. when it's the
first
letter of a

sentence; with names of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,

places and countries; with days

of the week and months; and

with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's titles.

IELTS essay topic writing your free time

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
84 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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