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Topic on modern shopping strategies on human life

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In the recent days, remote purchase of items is highly common. While this has impacted positively to peoples lively hood, it has also brought about drawbacks to others. Firstly, despite the fact that online shop services has made life for some people easy, it has also brought economic harm to other individuals. These shopping take place from Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp among other social platforms. It has made most people who are not social media platforms orientated to loose their relevance in their organisation rendering them jobless. For instance, most people lost jobs when covid19 was declared pandermic and people stayed at home. Shops were shut down. Most people resorted to online bussiness, this rendered sales people and shop attendants. In addition, most shop owners shifted to online shoping malls like Alibaba and Jumuia to sell their products. This has impacted positively towards environmental reservations. For instance, most people could travel using cars to shop. Because of online shopping, shipping of products is done i apool and use one vehicle to transport many peoples products. This means less emissions to the environment by several cars instead only one machine which is significantly reducing environmental hazard. In conclusion, an increased number of people are currently shoping online. For this reason, most people lost their jobs, however it slighly reduced car waste products emissions saving the ozone layer.
In the recent days, remote
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purchase
of items is
highly
common. While this has impacted
positively
to
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peoples
lively hood, it has
also
brought about drawbacks to others.

Firstly
, despite the fact that
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online
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shop
services has made life for
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some
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people
easy, it has
also
brought economic harm to other individuals. These shopping take place from Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp among other social platforms. It has made most
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people
who are not social media platforms orientated to
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loose
their relevance in their
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organisation
rendering them jobless.
For instance
, most
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people
lost jobs when
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covid19
was declared
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pandermic
and
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people
stayed at home.
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Shops
were shut
down. Most
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people
resorted to
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online
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bussiness
, this rendered sales
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people
and
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shop
attendants.

In addition
, most
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shop
owners shifted to
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online
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shoping
malls like Alibaba and
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Jumuia
to sell their
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products
. This has impacted
positively
towards environmental reservations.
For instance
, most
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people
could travel using cars to
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shop
.
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Because
of
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online
shopping, shipping of
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products
is done
i
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apool
and
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use
one vehicle to transport
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many
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peoples
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products
. This means
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less
emissions to the environment by several cars
instead
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only
one machine which is
significantly
reducing environmental hazard.

In conclusion
, an increased number of
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people
are
currently
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shoping
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online
.
For this reason
, most
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people
lost their jobs,
however
it
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slighly
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reduced
car waste
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products
emissions saving the ozone layer.
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IELTS essay Topic on modern shopping strategies on human life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
225 words
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