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Topic : Describe your daily life

Topic : Describe your daily life 0JjB
On Sunday last week there was a light wind, my daily routine are changed because I didn’t have school schedule. I spent all day my day entertaining and doing what I enjoy. I am a person who awake and active at night but I tried to wake up at 5a. m to make exercise then I gone for a ride to the hill last Sunday to improve my health and my brain. Then I had breakfast, I ate Pho – my favourite food and drunk tea. At 9a. m I had idle chit chat with my friends to relax after I worked hard all week. I were really addictive my phone so I could really take my eyes off screen telephone. I took up going to the supermarket on my free time to buy something I love. I though that I splurged on something that I didn’t feel essential: stickers, pens, . . . . I bought the fresh food, orange juice and snacks to eat when I saw Korean movies. In the afternoon, I engaged in club sports at school to enhance skills. I really love nurturing activities. At night, I listened to music UK to improve skills English and read a story English. At last, I created a plan to prepare next week and hit the sack at midnight.
On Sunday last week there was a light wind, my daily routine are
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I didn’t have school schedule. I spent all day my day entertaining and doing what I enjoy.

I am a person who awake and active at night
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I tried to wake up at 5a.
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m
to
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exercise then I
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gone
for a ride to the hill last Sunday to
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improve
my health and my brain. Then I had breakfast, I ate
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Pho
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my
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favourite
food and drunk tea. At 9a.
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m
I had idle
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chit chat
with my friends to relax after I worked
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hard
all week. I
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were
really
addictive my phone
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I could
really
take my eyes
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off screen
telephone. I took up going to the supermarket on my free time to
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buy
something I
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love
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I
though that I splurged on something that I didn’t feel essential: stickers, pens
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I
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bought
the fresh food, orange juice and snacks to eat when I
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saw
Korean movies. In the afternoon, I engaged in club sports at school to enhance
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skills
. I
really
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love
nurturing activities. At night, I listened to music UK to
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improve
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skills
English and read a story English. At last, I created a plan to prepare
next
week and hit the sack at midnight.
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IELTS essay Topic : Describe your daily life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
221 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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