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Topic about point of view between investment in new railway stations and upgrade local transporation

Topic about point of view between investment in new railway stations and upgrade local transporation D6p1m

Several people across the country would think it is worth it if the government develops a new railway line that can connect with other cities with a huge amount of money. Other people’s point of view says that this enormous investment is more useful to upgrade their current public transport. From my perspective, I would say this huge money should be balanced to spent on both new railways and existing local transportation.

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people
 across the country would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is worth it if the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 develops a new railway line that can connect with other cities with a huge amount of money. Other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s point of view says that this enormous investment is more useful to upgrade their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 public transport. From my perspective, I would say this huge money should be balanced
 to spent on both new railways and existing local transportation. 

IELTS essay Topic about point of view between investment in new railway stations and upgrade local transporation

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

72 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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