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Topic 3: “Computers will soon replace teachers in the classroom.” Do you agree or disagree? Get ready to talk to an audience about the issue

Topic 3: “Computers will soon replace teachers in the classroom. ” Get ready to talk to an audience about the issue 0MMG1
Automation has become a part of our everyday life. In fact it is now widely used in the field of teaching. Some people believe that computers will replace human instructors in the near future. However, in my opinion, this will not happen because physical presence of the instructor in the class room is important for effective teaching and learning. A teacher who is present in the classroom can easily understand whether the students are learning the topic at the current speed or any alteration in the teaching method is required. He or she can also figure out which students require more attention. For instance, my friend was weak in his studies. Our teachers often gave him special attention to keep him on the track. This could not have been possible if the teacher was not present in the classroom. Direct interaction during teaching are also equally important. Any doubts in the student’s mind are readily resolved because they can ask questions and get answers instantly. For example, I was not good at mathematics while doing my graduation. Hence, I would note down all my doubts during the class. After the regular class hours, I would approach my professor with my doubts. Those direct interactive sessions with my teacher improved my grades. On the other hand, a computer can only teach. It cannot figure out whether students have grasped the concepts or not. Not all students in a class are of the same intellectual level. Some learn fast while others require more attention. A computer will give the same attention to all students. This can affect the performance of poor students. To conclude, a computer may be faster than a human being, but it is not more intelligent. It cannot replace human instructors in the classroom because of its inherent shortcomings. Automation has its limits and I don’t expect computers to replace human teachers in the near future.
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believe that computers will replace
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human
instructors in the near future.
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, in my opinion, this will not happen
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because
physical presence of the instructor in the
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class
room is
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important
for effective
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teaching
and learning.

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teacher
who is present in the classroom can
easily
understand whether the
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students
are learning the topic at the
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current
speed or any alteration in the
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teaching
method
is required
. He or she can
also
figure out which
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students
require more
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attention
.
For instance
, my friend was weak in his studies. Our
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teachers
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often
gave him special
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attention
to
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keep
him on the
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track
. This could not have been possible if the
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teacher
was not present in the classroom.

Direct interaction during
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teaching
are
also
equally
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important
. Any doubts in the
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student’s
mind are
readily
resolved
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because
they can ask questions and
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get
answers
instantly
.
For example
, I was not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at mathematics while doing my graduation.
Hence
, I would note down all my doubts during the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. After the regular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
hours, I would approach my professor with my doubts. Those direct interactive sessions with my
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teacher
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
my grades.

On the other hand
, a computer can
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only
teach. It cannot figure out whether
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students
have grasped the concepts or not. Not all
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students
in a
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class
are of the same intellectual level.
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Some
learn
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fast
while others require more
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attention
. A computer will give the same
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attention
to all
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students
. This can affect the performance of poor students.

To conclude
, a computer may be faster than a
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human
being,
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but
it is not more intelligent. It cannot replace
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human
instructors in the classroom
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because
of its inherent shortcomings. Automation has its limits and I don’t
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expect
computers to replace
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human
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teachers
in the near future.
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IELTS essay Topic 3: “Computers will soon replace teachers in the classroom. ” Get ready to talk to an audience about the issue

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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