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Write a paragraph of 150 words about your favorite sport.

Write a paragraph of 150 words about your favorite sport. x00ob
My favorite sport is playing football. I often play football in my spare time. After completing my home work at home, I generally spend my lot of free time in playing football. I was so interested to play football from my childhood however started learning to play well when I was 5 years old. I was in one class when I was 5 years old. My father asked to my class teacher in the PTM about my hobby of football. And my teacher told him that there is a facility of playing sports daily in the school from class 1 so you can admit your child. Now, I really enjoy playing football and participate in the inter-school competitions.
My favorite sport is
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playing
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football
. I
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often
play
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football
in my spare time. After completing my home work at home, I
generally
spend my lot of free time in
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playing
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football
. I was
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so
interested to play
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football
from my childhood
however
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started
learning to play well when I was 5 years
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old
. I was in one
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class
when I was 5 years
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old
. My father
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asked to
my
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class
teacher in the PTM about my hobby of
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football
. And my teacher
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told
him that there is a facility of
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playing
sports daily in the school from
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class
1
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so
you can admit your child.
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Now
, I
really
enjoy
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playing
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and participate in the inter-school competitions.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of 150 words about your favorite sport.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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