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How’s the COVID-19 effect with your life

How’s the COVID-19 effect with your life N88Y2
Since Coronavirus pandemic has happened at the beginning of the year until now and tend to be longer, the virus is still spreading out there. Meanwhile, people also need to change their behaviors and routines. Because going outside without a protection is not safe as it used to be. People need to wear a masks, avoid close contact with others, and the worst thing is having a quarantine or lockdown. My life has changed a lot with many effects which are caused by the pandemic. Firstly, as we know that we had a quarantine at the beginning of the year which makes us not be able to go outside. We have to stay in for about 3 months, people can’t in touch with others. So many things have been changed, we have to take online classes instead. From my perspective, I think online classes are not working for me. A lot of people might have the same idea as me, the students should be able to interact with classes by physical actions and it’s easy for them to express their opinions in physical classes. In addition, many activities have to cancel because we have to be aware about meeting with others. It also affect my family business and our finances. Secondly, being inside or staying at home for long time also cause people to be depressed as well, using our phones all the time or even loneliness. Spending most of your time on phone or computer are the usual behavior that we can see during the quarantine. It’s not good for people staring on the screen all the time, this affects to human in physical and mental ways. Obviously, staring on screen that has blue light will harm your eyes. As we know, spending over time on our phones could damage our eyes and cause vision problems. Some people might have a back pain which is normally caused by using computer for long time. Besides, being on social media for long term can cause stress, depression, and anxiety. This also happened to me, at that time I decided to back off my social media and do social detox. However, all the things I’ve said might be a advantages for some groups of people. As taking online classes are easy and comfortable for them, or using social media helps them from being alone. These things can always be happen cause every coin has two sides. But it should be in the scope of not harming yourself. Finally, the situation of the virus in Thailand is getting much better than before. I hope that we will get rid of it soon. Still be aware of the protection, wear your mask and wash your hands often to reduce the infection rate.
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now
and tend to be longer, the virus is
still
spreading out there. Meanwhile,
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people
also
need to
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change
their behaviors and routines.
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going outside without a protection is not safe as it
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used
to be.
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need to wear
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, avoid close contact with others, and the worst thing is having a quarantine or lockdown. My life has
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changed
a lot with
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effects which
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Firstly
, as we know that we had a quarantine at the beginning of the year which
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us not be able to go outside. We
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people
can’t in touch with others.
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many
things have been
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take online
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classes
instead
. From my perspective, I
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think
online
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classes
are not working for me.
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people
might have the same
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as me, the students should be able to interact with
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classes
by physical actions and it’s easy for them to express their opinions in physical
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classes
.
In addition
,
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many
activities
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have to
cancel
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because
we
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have to
be aware about meeting with others. It
also
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affect
my family business and our finances.

Secondly
, being inside or staying at home for long
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also
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people
to
be depressed
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, using our phones all the
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or even loneliness. Spending most of your
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time
on phone or computer are the usual behavior that we can
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see
during the quarantine. It’s not
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good
for
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people
staring on the screen all the
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, this affects to human in physical and mental ways.
Obviously
, staring on screen that has blue light will harm your eyes. As we know, spending over
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time
on our phones could damage our eyes and
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cause
vision problems.
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Some
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people
might have a back pain which is
normally
caused by using computer for long
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time
.
Besides
, being on
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social
media for long term can
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cause
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stress
, depression, and anxiety. This
also
happened to me, at that
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time
I decided to back off my
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social
media and do
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detox.
However
, all the things I’ve said might be
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people
. As taking online
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classes
are easy and comfortable for them, or using
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social
media
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helps
them from being alone. These things can
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always be happen
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every coin has two sides.
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But
it should be in the scope of not harming yourself.

Finally
, the situation of the virus in Thailand is getting much better than
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before
. I hope that we will
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get
rid of it
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soon
.
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Still
be aware of the protection, wear your mask and wash your hands
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to
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reduce
the infection rate.
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IELTS essay How’s the COVID-19 effect with your life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
458 words
5.5
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