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Today works are get money mindhi? Do u agree at disagree?

Today works are get money mindhi? Do u agree at disagree? rKKl2
Money rolled the world in many way staff getting money makes. I agree with this statement this easy will discourse in coming paragraphs. Money make the workers. On one hand Money is the mani thing to perceive any item at any corners of the work make the demand the increase the salary for the experience and talent dut to make this money the out side world also get the lot of cost the perches. Continue by sealing others the also like the crest the min section to make the fun the fun slob 99% of propulam due to fun. To sun up to make all propulam and also make the solution.
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On one hand
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thing to perceive any item at any corners of the work
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the demand the increase the salary for the experience and talent
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the
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the lot of cost the perches.

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slob 99% of
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all
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IELTS essay Today works are get money mindhi? Do u agree at disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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