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crime
 is critical problem in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
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plathora
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this
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world
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but
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of cause
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
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world
. For instance
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reachers
 find that the 70 unemployment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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world
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who’s lot
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but
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so
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crime
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secondly
, the highest level of illiteracy is also
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crime
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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people
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so
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suffer
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many
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tired
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create
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aa
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crime
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start
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many
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government
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centres
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a
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government
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ccD
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make
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clear
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many
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