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Topic 1: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic 1: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. bWQ6
the internet is increasingly widely used in the world. Just like the traditional press, it provides a large amount of information and news to people. With the current trend, I believe that the internet will soon be as important as the newspapers newspapers is the vital important source of news for a variety of reasons. First press was a media that appeared many centuries ago and had high coverage With only a small amount of money, we will immediately have a newspaper filled with information. Moreover, no one can access the Internet. . For example, in remote hilly areas that do not have internet access or farmers who do not have the conditions to connect to the internet. Last but not least, journalism is a highly accurate source of information. . Because it's compiled from professional, well-presented journalists and thoroughly tested before release. It's also possible that there's a lot of people who like to read the news in the press rather than look at the computer screen On the other hand, the internet is increasingly popular in searching for information. It provides a lot of information about what's happening in the worlde provides a large amount of information and news to readers. When looking for an event, many people can spend a lot of time searching for it in the newspapers, but with the internet search function, only one click, a series of relevant information about the event will appear. Another benefit of the internet is that it allows people to access information quickly. Moreover, we can also share that information with others through links. even you can contribute your knowledge on social media. For example, more and more technology applications appear such as youtube, intargram where people can share or search for information on it. Instead of reading in newspapers, many people prefer to read tuns online, because they can comment and state their personal opinions under the comments section of the articles. . Each person will have a different view of something, so when considering more of their thoughts or perspectives on the topic they need to find, this information researcher will understand more deeply and have a more multi-dimensional view. In the current internet age, holding with a smartphone or device which is connected to the internet is like holding a giant source of information. In conclution, I completely disagree with this view. Although the importance of the newspapers is undeniable, I believe the internet will become more and more popular and play as important a role as it is.
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is the vital
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source of
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for a variety of reasons.
First
press was
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a media
that appeared
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many
centuries ago and had high coverage With
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only
a
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small
amount of money, we will immediately have a
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newspaper
filled with
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information
.
Moreover
, no one can access the Internet.
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.
For example
, in remote hilly areas that do not have internet access or farmers who do not have the conditions to connect to the internet. Last
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but
not least, journalism is a
highly
accurate source of
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information
.
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.
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Because
it's compiled from professional, well-presented journalists and
thoroughly
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tested
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before
release. It's
also
possible that there's
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a lot of
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people
who like to read the
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news
in the press
rather
than look at the computer screen

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, the internet is
increasingly
popular in searching for
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. It provides
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a lot of
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information
about what's happening in the
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provides a large amount of
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information
and
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news
to readers. When looking for an
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event
,
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people
can spend
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time searching for it in the
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newspapers
,
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with the internet search function,
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only
one click, a series of relevant
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information
about the
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event
will appear. Another benefit of the internet is that it
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allows
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people
to access
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quickly
.
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, we can
also
share that
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information
with others through links.
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even
you can contribute your knowledge on social media.
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, more and more technology applications appear such as
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youtube
,
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intargram
where
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people
can share or search for
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information
on it.
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of reading in
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newspapers
,
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people
prefer to read tuns online,
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they can comment and state their personal opinions under the comments section of the articles.
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.
Each person will have a
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different
view of something,
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when considering more of their thoughts or perspectives on the topic they need to find, this
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information
researcher will understand more
deeply
and have a more multi-dimensional view. In the
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current
internet age, holding with a smartphone or device which
is connected
to the internet is like holding a giant source of information.

In
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conclution
, I completely disagree with this view. Although the importance of the
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newspapers
is undeniable, I believe the internet will become more and more popular and play as
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important
a role as it is.
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IELTS essay Topic 1: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
424 words
5.5
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