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Top medal winners all time

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The given two data show information about which nation’s medalists, which countries have won the most places in summer and winter Olympics. Overall, it is clear that the USA as well as USSR are holding top positions, and these two countries’ athletes Michael Phelps and Larysa Latynina from swimming and gymnastics respectively have won more medals than other countries’ sportsmen. However, Italy has won least medal. According to the result, USA has obtained most medals approximately 2600 in all Olympics, additional, American athlete Michael Phelps has 22 awards from swimming which is the fewest all around world, nevertheless, Norwegian competitor Ole Einar Bjoerndalen has won 13 medals competing in Biathlon. Europian three countries Great Britain and Germany, Italy have around 500 medals equally in summer and winter Olympics. Moreover, USSR has gained 1500 medals less than USA, besides Larysa Latynina and Nikolai Andrianov, Borys Shakhlin have 18, 15, 13 medals participating in gymnastics respectively.
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information about which nation’s medalists, which
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countries
have won the most places in summer and winter Olympics.

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, it is
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that the USA
as well
as USSR are holding top positions, and these two
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athletes Michael Phelps and
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Larysa
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Latynina
from swimming and gymnastics
respectively
have won more
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medals
than other
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countries’
sportsmen.
However
, Italy has won
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least
medal.

According to the result, USA has obtained most
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approximately 2600 in all Olympics, additional, American athlete Michael Phelps has 22 awards from swimming which is the fewest all around world,
nevertheless
, Norwegian competitor Ole
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Einar
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Bjoerndalen
has won 13
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medals
competing in Biathlon.

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Europian
three
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countries
Great Britain and Germany, Italy
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have
around 500
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medals
equally
in summer and winter Olympics.
Moreover
, USSR has gained 1500
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medals
less
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than USA
,
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Larysa
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Latynina
and Nikolai
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Andrianov
,
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Borys
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Shakhlin
have 18, 15, 13
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participating in gymnastics
respectively
.
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IELTS essay Top medal winners all time

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