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Top 3 important rules of my family

Top 3 important rules of my family aQpEY
I heard that you will be staying at our house for 2 months from my parents and I am very honored with that. We will live in a two-story house on the outskirts of the city. You asked me about our family rules. There are three important ones that we must follow. One important rule in my family is that every member of the family has to wake up and has breakfast at 6: 30 a. m. My parents think that breakfast is the most important meal of the day because it gives you energy for the whole day The second most important rule is not to go out after 10pm. If you go out at that time, it will be quite dangerous and affect your sleep and health Another important rule is that you must keep your room clean. clean rooms make you more comfortable after a hard day's work and will be very bright If you have any questions, please let me know. Wo will try our best to make you feel comfortable during your stay with us. I hope you will enjoy your time in Viet Nam. Looking forward to meeting you. Best wishes, Hoai An
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for 2 months from my
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honored with that. We will
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in a two-story
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on the outskirts of the city.

You asked me about our family
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rules
. There are three
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important
ones that we
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follow.

One
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in my family is that every member of the family
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wake up and has breakfast at 6: 30 a. m. My parents
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think
that breakfast is the most
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important
meal of the day
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because
it gives you energy for the whole
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day


The second most
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rule
is not to go out after 10pm. If you go out at that time, it will be quite
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dangerous
and affect your sleep and
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health


Another
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important
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rule
is that you
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your room clean.
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clean
rooms
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make
you more comfortable after a
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hard
day's work and will be
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very
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bright


If you have any questions,
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me know.
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Wo will
try our best to
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you feel comfortable during your stay with us.

I hope you will enjoy your time in
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Nam.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Best wishes,

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Hoai
An

IELTS essay Top 3 important rules of my family

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
198 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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