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Describe the first time you went to high school

Describe the first time you went to high school 5Bmbe

it has three blocks only, and my classroom was on the second floor. it had double-walled construction for heat insulation, there are many wall fans hanging in every corner around my classroom. Since where I live is only in the countryside, there won't be enough air condition for every classroom. There were all types of labs, such as computer, chemistry, biology. I was very nervous on the first day because I have to sit down in the yard of my school to hear a lot of rules and their strictness. Unlike in secondary school, we will have old friends from elementary school, when in high school, all of our classmates are new and come from different places. We have entered the class half an hour before the time, and we felt relaxed when we started to talk with other students.

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