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Tourism today create a verity of problems, such as polution due to flight, transport and dirty water.

Tourism today create a verity of problems, such as polution due to flight, transport and dirty water. PLQWg
Government should NOT impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation. Nowadays, environmental issues caused both by tourists and tourism-related activities have become so grave that many people insist on imposing hefty taxes on air travel and hotels for the sake of restricting the tourist inflow. I, however, disagree with this notion and believe that the authority should find better measures to address this rather than limiting the tourism industry with the burden of extra tax. The key reason why I believe that governments ought to avoid levying more taxes on flights and accommodations is that tourism creates employment for local people and make economic movements in the region. It also brings significant foreign remittance to the country. Many countries, St. Lucia, Maldives and Thailand, for example, heavily depend on the steady earning their tourism sector brings for them. It also makes people tolerant of different cultures and let them learn about diverse cultures and traditions. If more taxes are imposed on the movement and accommodation of tourists, it would bring catastrophic results for many countries. Therefore, measures which would entail a decline in tourists should not be implemented. To control pollution and excessive wastages, authorities can employ workers to clean their surroundings while instructing visitors not to pollute the environment. Policies to improve the manners of tourists while staying in a foreign country should be implemented. Improving public buses and dedicating transports for tourists can reduce traffic congestions to a great extent. Moreover, scientific research and engineering feats can reduce the pollution created by vehicles and aeroplanes to a great extend and money should be spent on such research works. These solutions would improve the situation on the one hand, and not deprive citizens of jobs and economic freedom on the other hand. To conclude, extra levies on tourist transportation and accommodation will limit the inflow of tourists, putting local citizen’s livelihoods at risk, especially in tourism-dependant countries. It is expected that the authorities would find better solutions that try to control tourists’ actions in travel destinations instead of reducing their number and employ more people and technology to solve the problem.
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Government
should NOT impose extra
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taxes
on flights or accommodation.

Nowadays, environmental issues caused both by
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tourists
and tourism-related activities have become
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so
grave that
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many
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people
insist on imposing hefty
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taxes
on air travel and hotels for the sake of restricting the
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tourist
inflow. I,
however
, disagree with this notion and believe that the authority should find better measures to address this
rather
than limiting the tourism industry with the burden of extra tax.

The key reason why I believe that
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governments
ought to avoid levying more
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taxes
on flights and accommodations is that tourism creates employment for local
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people
and
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make
economic movements in the region. It
also
brings significant foreign remittance to the
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country
.
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Many
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countries
, St. Lucia, Maldives and Thailand,
for example
,
heavily
depend on the steady earning their tourism sector brings for them. It
also
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makes
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people
tolerant of
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different
cultures and
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let
them learn about diverse cultures and traditions. If more
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taxes
are imposed
on the movement and accommodation of
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tourists
, it would bring catastrophic results for
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many
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countries
.
Therefore
, measures which would entail a decline in
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tourists
should not
be implemented
.

To control pollution and excessive
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wastages
, authorities can employ workers to clean their surroundings while instructing visitors not to pollute the environment. Policies to
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improve
the manners of
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tourists
while staying in a foreign
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country
should
be implemented
. Improving public buses and dedicating transports for
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tourists
can
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reduce
traffic congestions to a great extent.
Moreover
, scientific research and engineering feats can
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reduce
the pollution created by vehicles and
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aeroplanes
to a great
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extend
and money should
be spent
on such research works. These solutions would
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improve
the situation on the one hand, and not deprive citizens of jobs and economic freedom
on the other hand
.

To conclude
, extra levies on
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tourist
transportation and accommodation will limit the inflow of
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tourists
, putting local citizen’s livelihoods at
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risk
,
especially
in
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tourism-dependant
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countries
. It is
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expected
that the authorities would find better solutions that try to control
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tourists’
actions in travel destinations
instead
of reducing their number and employ more
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people
and technology to solve the problem.
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IELTS essay Tourism today create a verity of problems, such as polution due to flight, transport and dirty water.

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