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took place in a park called Castellon from 2000 to present.

The supplied mape compare data regarding that took place in a park called Castellon from 2000 to present. The Castellon have a lot of difference between 2000 and present. 2000 years have got a lot old market near the city centre, train station in frond old market, university beside trees and trees opposite has got a car and street and port. City centre is place where it is in the middle of street. Castellon`s nature are change nowadays. City is a such beautiful, exhilarating and soaring. Nowadays Castellon is have got a new hall of residence, new shopping centre, police station, new train station, new airport(under construction)bike rental schema, new covered market, cinema, port and bar and clubs. The two schema have got a different. There are hall of residence, new shopping centre, airport, train station, cinema, bar and clubs, police station and bike centre. And they have got a similarity. There are university, port and city centre.
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compare data regarding that took place in a park called
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Castellon
from 2000 to present.

The
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Castellon
have
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difference between 2000 and present. 2000 years have
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a
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lot
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old
market near the city
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centre
, train
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station
in frond
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old
market, university beside trees and trees opposite has
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a car and street and port. City
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centre
is place where it is in the middle of street.

The character between ‘Castellon’ and ‘s’ is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use “Castellon’s” (curly apostrophe) or “Castellon’s” (straight apostrophe).
Castellon`s
nature are
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change
nowadays. City is a such
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beautiful
, exhilarating and soaring. Nowadays
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Castellon
is
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have
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a
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new
hall of residence,
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new
shopping
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centre
, police
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station
,
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new
train
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station
,
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new
airport(under construction)bike rental schema,
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new
covered market, cinema, port and bar and clubs.

The two schema have
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a
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different
. There are
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hall
of residence,
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new
shopping
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centre
, airport, train
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station
, cinema, bar and clubs, police
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station
and bike
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centre
.

And they have
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a similarity. There are university, port and city
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centre
.
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IELTS essay took place in a park called Castellon from 2000 to present.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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