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Too much outdoor lighting is a problem in many cities nowadays. What are the causes and negative impacts of light pollution in cities?

In this day and age, vibrant and colorful decorations and advertisement boards are placed in many urban areas. This phenomenon leads to detrimental effects to the environment and human health. To discuss the topic thoroughly, I will further analyze the cause and effect of the social issue in the following essay. Busines development is one of the fundamental reasons of leading light pollution. Companies use sparkling colors to attract customer on streets, promoting their newly released commodities and creating the trend of consumerism in society. For example, advertisement with brilliant lights are placed by UNIQLO to convey new winter dressings in Mong Kok, which is a hustle district in Hong Kong. Even at midnight, lights of showcases will not switch off, causing abundant light power in cities. Eventually, the emission of lights leads to light pollution. As a result, light pollution creates harmful impacts on the environment and human health. The pollution alters the living habit of animal species and breaks the ecosystem in nature. Scientists point out that the amount of owls have decreased because of light pollution. It cannot differentiate day and night since the artificial light is a distractor. In addition, different medical reports show that people live in brighter areas will have a higher chance on diagnosis of eye diseases. This illustrates that residents who live near the commercial boards cannot take good rest. In a long term, their physical and mental health will be damaged. To conclude, the government should implement policies to restrict the rots of light pollution and encourage the development of green industry. Henceforth, the environmental species and health of citizens can be protected.
In this day and age, vibrant and colorful decorations and advertisement boards
are placed
in
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many
urban areas. This phenomenon leads to detrimental effects to the environment and human
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health
. To discuss the topic
thoroughly
, I will
further
analyze the cause and effect of the social issue in the following essay.

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Busines
development is one of the fundamental reasons of leading
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light
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pollution
.
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Companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
sparkling colors to attract customer on streets, promoting their
newly
released commodities and creating the trend of consumerism in society.
For example
, advertisement with brilliant
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lights
are placed
by UNIQLO to convey new winter dressings in
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Mong
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Kok
, which is a hustle district in Hong Kong. Even at midnight,
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lights
of showcases will not switch off, causing abundant
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light
power in cities.
Eventually
, the emission of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
leads to
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light
pollution.

As a result
,
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light
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pollution
creates harmful impacts on the environment and human
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health
. The
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pollution
alters the living habit of animal species and breaks the ecosystem in nature. Scientists point out that the amount of owls
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have
decreased
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because
of
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light
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pollution
. It cannot differentiate day and night since the artificial
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light
is a distractor.
In addition
,
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different
medical reports
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show
that
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people
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live
in brighter areas will have a higher chance on diagnosis of eye diseases. This illustrates that residents who
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live
near the commercial boards cannot take
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good
rest. In a long term, their physical and mental
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health
will
be damaged
.

To conclude
, the
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government
should implement policies to restrict the rots of
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light
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
and encourage the development of green industry. Henceforth, the environmental species and
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health
of citizens can
be protected
.
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IELTS essay Too much outdoor lighting is a problem in many cities nowadays. What are the causes and negative impacts of light pollution in cities?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
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