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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, all over the world had changed a lot as consequences of economic growth. We cannot deny that people consume much more than the past. They buy things a lot although there are not necessary and sometimes they cannot afford.  It can cause by many factor such as Copycat and social influences. However, many people did not know it could make a huge problem named debt. Copycat behaviour is happening everywhere and increasing all the times.
Nowadays, all over the world had
changed
a lot as consequences of economic growth. We cannot deny that
people
consume much more than the past. They
buy
things a lot although there are
not
necessary and
sometimes
they cannot afford.  It can cause by
many factor
such as Copycat and social influences.
However
,
many
people
did not know it could
make
a huge problem named debt.

Copycat
behaviour
is happening everywhere and increasing all the times.
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IELTS essay Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

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  American English
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76 words
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