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TOKYO – Washoku, the traditional cuisine of Japan, is being considered for designation as part of the world's priceless cultural heritage by the U.

TOKYO – Washoku, the traditional cuisine of Japan, is being considered for designation as part of the world's priceless cultural heritage by the U. 953g0
TOKYO – Washoku, the traditional cuisine of Japan, is being considered for designation as part of the world's priceless cultural heritage by the U. N. this week. Washoku embraces seasonal ingredients, a unique taste, time consuming preparation and a style of eating steeped in centuries of tradition. Kumakura believes UNESCO recognition will send a global message and boost efforts to save washoku, a fight that faces serious challenges. The younger generation is increasingly eating Krispy Kreme donuts and McDonald's instead of eating rice. Their reasonable prices and fast service are prevalent and attract the stomachs of the workaholic “ salaryman” and OL, short for “ office lady”. As washoku dims in popularity, the inherent community relations that have historically existed are more likely to be forgotten and lost, such as cooking together for New Year's and other festivals.
TOKYO
Washoku
, the traditional cuisine of Japan, is
being considered
for designation as part of the world's priceless cultural heritage by the U. N. this week.
Washoku
embraces seasonal ingredients, a unique taste,
time consuming
preparation and a style of eating steeped in centuries of tradition.
Kumakura
believes UNESCO recognition will
send
a global message and boost efforts to save
washoku
, a fight that faces serious challenges. The younger generation is
increasingly
eating
Krispy
Kreme
donuts and McDonald's
instead
of eating rice. Their reasonable prices and
fast
service are prevalent and attract the stomachs of the workaholic
salaryman
” and
OL
, short for
office lady”. As
washoku
dims in popularity, the inherent community relations that have
historically
existed are more likely to
be forgotten
and lost, such as cooking together for New Year's and other festivals.
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IELTS essay TOKYO – Washoku, the traditional cuisine of Japan, is being considered for designation as part of the world's priceless cultural heritage by the U.

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