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This post pleased me since it accurately depicts one of my interests, which is the preservation of each country's arts and culture. Many modern services emerge as a result of societal growth, and this is a significant factor determining a country's long-standing culture. International fast food is displacing traditional cuisine. This has a significant negative impact on society and the family. I strongly agree with this standpoint because traditional cuisines are a part of our cultural heritage, but multinational fast foods are harming people's health. mWea1

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