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should poor countries continue to receive international aids ?? give your views in no less than 200 words

should poor countries continue to receive international aids? ? give your views in no less than 200 words Nma7y
now a days approximately 7 billions people lives all over the world. Everyones income is not same. In every counties has poor people. they cant lead their life properly. So i strongly believed that poor countries should continue to accept international aids. this is because it will develop a countries education and people could created thei income source. first of all, for a poor nation, they cant continue their study. study is a convenient thing for develop a country. eventually people leave their study by leak of finance. when they will get support like international aids, then men could bear their study cost. for example, in Bangladesh, there live lots of rohingya, their child cant continue their study while they will get financial support, it will be better for them secondly, most of the time we can see that lots of people jobless and also it, s bardem for countries. they are not capable to do something, because they are not litterate on the other hand do not have finance. for instances, in our countries has much more unemployed people. if they had gotten supports it might be welfare for them. on the other contrary, some bad politician doing worst job by this international aids. if government take a massive step then it will be corruption clear. in conclusion, thus international aids badly needed for a poor or needy countries. it, s developed a counties rapidly.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
now a days
approximately 7 billions
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
all over the world.
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Everyones
income is not same. In every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "county"?
counties
has
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poor
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people
.
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they
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cant
lead their life
properly
.
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So
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i
strongly
believed that
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poor
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countries
should continue to accept
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international
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aids
.
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this
is
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because
it will develop a
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countries
education and
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people
could
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "create"
created
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thei
income source.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
first of all
, for a
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poor
nation, they
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cant
continue their
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study
.
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study
is a convenient thing for develop a
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country
.
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eventually
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people
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leave
their
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study
by leak of finance.
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when
they will
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get
support like
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international
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aids
, then
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men
could bear their
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study
cost.
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for
example, in Bangladesh, there
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live
lots of
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rohingya
, their child cant continue their
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study
while they will
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get
financial support, it will be better for
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
them


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secondly
, most of the time we can
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see
that lots of
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people
jobless and
also
it, s
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bardem
for
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countries
.
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they
are not capable to do something,
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because
they are not
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litterate
on the other hand
do not have finance.
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for
instances, in our
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countries
has much more unemployed
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people
.
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if
they had gotten supports it might be welfare for them.

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on
the other contrary,
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some
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bad
politician doing
A determiner is probably missing here: "the worst".
worst
job by this
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international
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aids
.
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if
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government
take a massive step then it will be corruption
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clear
.

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in
conclusion,
thus
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international
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aids
badly
needed for a
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poor
or needy
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countries
.
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it
, s developed
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a county" or simply "counties"?
a counties
rapidly
.
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IELTS essay should poor countries continue to receive international aids? ? give your views in no less than 200 words

Essay
  American English
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236 words
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