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Referring to the main points in the reading passage, describe the Opera Sydney House. Then using information from both the reading and the lecture, then explains why the professor classifies the building as unique.

Referring to the main points in the reading passage, describe the Opera Sydney House. Then using information from both the reading and the lecture, then explains why the professor classifies the building as unique. 7aKW3
The Sydney Opera house was selected to be built based on a model proposed by Jorn Ultzon who gave his model in one of the international competition. It was regarded one of the wonders and the Professor quotes the Opera house to be unique and one of a kind. Though difficulties were faced in the completion of the Opera house, it was blend of art and engineering architecture. The Sydney Opera house appeared to alter its shape based on from which particular direction it was seen. The Professor quotes that it will not fit into any particular category in a strict manner. Cons. . .
The Sydney
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was selected
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be built
based on a model proposed by
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Jorn
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Ultzon
who gave his model in one of the international competition. It
was regarded
one of the wonders and the Professor quotes the
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Opera
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house
to be unique and one of a kind. Though difficulties
were faced
in the completion of the
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Opera
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house
, it was
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blend
of art and engineering architecture.

The Sydney
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Opera
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house
appeared to alter its shape based on from which particular direction it was
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seen
. The Professor quotes that it will not fit into any particular category
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in a strict manner
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IELTS essay Referring to the main points in the reading passage, describe the Opera Sydney House. Then using information from both the reading and the lecture, then explains why the professor classifies the building as unique.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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