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Summarize the problems with the core curriculum discussed in the lecture, and then explain the advantages to fixing these problems using points from the reading.

Summarize the problems with the core curriculum discussed in the lecture, and then explain the advantages to fixing these problems using points from the reading. GMorw
The core curriculum refers to the set of courses taken by all the majors irrespective of their concerned department. The professor states that, students must know a lot beyond their major subject and that is the sole aim of the 'core curriculum'. These courses are compulsory for the students and they contribute a significant part towards an individual in earning his degree. The curriculum review board and the focus group involving students have discussed together and arrived at a set of problems, that are currently affecting the 'core curriculum'. The professor state. . .
The core curriculum refers to the set of courses taken by all the majors irrespective of their concerned department. The professor states that, students
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know a lot beyond their major subject and
that is
the sole aim of the 'core curriculum'. These courses are compulsory for the
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students and
they contribute a significant part towards an individual in earning his degree.

The curriculum review board and the focus group involving students have discussed together and arrived at a set of problems, that are
currently
affecting the 'core curriculum'. The professor state.
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IELTS essay Summarize the problems with the core curriculum discussed in the lecture, and then explain the advantages to fixing these problems using points from the reading.

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