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today`s one of the urgent issues is. . . x0Ema
today`s one of the urgent issues is covid 19. be this problem is the most dangerous disease for the whole world. Each of the doctors calls it the CORONA virus. the disease worried people because so many people have diet to date. That`s why we must wear a mask. because, the mask protects us from the Virus. We are not supposed to go out. because there are a lot of viruses outside. On the one hand quarantine seems to be advantageouse. First and foremost, many people have changed for the better. On the other hand it appears to be disadvantegous. firstly, many people died. Secondly, many people went hungry. Finally, all moced away from each other. If we say let people recover. We should not go out. We had better eat before going. The quarantine is not end. it must be dangerous. In conculation, each of us wear a mask the quarantine is endangered for us. Sitting at home is harmless for us. The reason why we need mask is that, it is protect our health
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today`s
one of the urgent issues is
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
.
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be
this problem is the most
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dangerous
disease for the whole world. Each of the doctors calls it the
The term "CORONAvirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
CORONA virus
.
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the
disease worried
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people
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because
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so
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many
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people
have diet to date.
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That`s
why we
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must
wear a
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mask
.
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because
, the
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mask
protects us from the Virus. We are not supposed to go out.
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because
there are
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a lot of
viruses outside. On the one hand quarantine seems to be
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advantageouse
.
First
and foremost,
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many
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people
have
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changed
for the better.
On the other hand
it appears to be
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disadvantegous
.
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firstly
,
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many
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people
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died
.
Secondly
,
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many
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people
went hungry.
Finally
, all
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moced
away from each other.
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If
we say
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let
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people
recover. We should not go out. We had better eat
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before
going. The quarantine is not
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end
.
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it
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must
be
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dangerous
. In
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conculation
, each of us wear a
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mask
the quarantine
is endangered
for us. Sitting at home is harmless for us. The reason why we need
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mask
is that, it is
Consider using a past participle here: "protected".
protect
our
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health

IELTS essay today`s one of the urgent issues is. . .

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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