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Today's generation vs parent's generation

Today's generation vs parent's generation Ed10D
It is crystal clear that today’s generation has very difference with parent’s generation in many way such as in thinking and behaviour. Today’s generation is very vastly different from generation before. Today’s generation is very widening especially in reliance on technology, improved standard of living and the different value placed on academic qualification. Firstly, today’s generation is molded by global reach of technology. This is because today’s generation has different set, rules and standards. They speak their minds and demand more liberal standard. However, these things are viewed negatively by parents because it’s different from their generation. They have different values because they were not brought up with technology. For example, today’s generation has internet facilities and television. Thus, they were influenced by Western values and global such as they emulate what they see and hear online. Don’t you think the reliance on technology has an impact on the generation gap today? Secondly, today’s generation has improved standard of living. They can afford that luxuries.
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difference with parent’s generation in
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from generation
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generation is
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widening
especially
in reliance on
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technology
,
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improved
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standard
of living and the
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different
value placed on academic qualification.

Firstly
,
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today’s
generation
is molded
by global reach of
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technology
. This is
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because
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today’s
generation has
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different
set,
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rules
and
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. They speak their minds and demand more liberal
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standard
.
However
, these things
are viewed
negatively
by parents
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it’s
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different
from their generation. They have
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different
values
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because
they were not brought up with
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technology
.
For example
,
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today’s
generation has internet facilities and television.
Thus
, they
were influenced
by Western values and global such as they emulate what they
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see
and hear online. Don’t you
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think
the reliance on
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technology
has an impact on the generation gap
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today
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,
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IELTS essay Today's generation vs parent's generation

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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