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Today's food travels thousands of miles before it reach customers.

Today's food travels thousands of miles before it reach customers. 2ljGb
Nowadays, food is travelling a lot before it reach its customers. It is clear that people are buying a large amount of food from different cuisines. However, the ideas vary when it comes to the issue whether this is positive or negative trend. Although it has several beneficial sides, I consider that it causes a few problems. It is obvious that this trend has a number of plus sides that can be seen. First of all, it provides consumers variety of foods. Consumers can easily choose either national food or from foreign countries cuisines. For instance, in Uzbekistan different kinds of Italian pizza or Japanese sushi can be found wherever the consumer wants. Furthermore, it give consumers further time while they are waiting for the meal. Individuals can be busy with their houseworks, hobbies and so on. For example, they can play chess with one another if they live together. Turning to disadvantages, delivering foods involves lots of fossil fuels. This damages not only the storage of natural resources but also the world environment. Utilizing of fossil fuels can cause global warming which is the most vital problem of today's world. For example, a lot of transportation which carrying foods release loads of exhaust fumes which go up to ozone layer. Second of all, local food is fresher than packaged food. While being distributed packaged food lose its nutrients markedly. Finally, long distance food can not be acceptable for all people. In conclusion, distribution of foods has a lot pros sides. But the drawbacks of delivering foods overweighs its profits.
Nowadays,
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is travelling a
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before
it reach its customers. It is
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clear
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people
are buying a large amount of
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food
from
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cuisines.
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positive
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trend. Although it has several beneficial sides, I consider that it causes a few problems. It is obvious that this trend has a number of plus sides that can be
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, it provides
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consumers
variety of
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foods
.
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Consumers
can
easily
choose either national
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food
or from foreign countries cuisines.
For instance
, in Uzbekistan
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different
kinds of Italian pizza or Japanese sushi can
be found
wherever the
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consumer
wants.
Furthermore
, it
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give
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consumers
further
time while they are waiting for the meal. Individuals can be busy with their
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houseworks
, hobbies and
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on.
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, they can play chess with one another if they
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live
together. Turning to disadvantages, delivering
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foods
involves
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lots
of fossil fuels. This damages not
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only
the storage of natural resources
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also
the world environment. Utilizing of fossil fuels can cause global warming which is the most vital problem of
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today
's world.
For example
, a
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lot
of transportation which carrying
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foods
release loads of exhaust fumes which go up to ozone layer. Second of all, local
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food
is fresher than packaged
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food
.
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While
being distributed
packaged
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food
lose its nutrients
markedly
.
Finally
, long distance
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food
can not be acceptable for all
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people
.
In conclusion
, distribution of
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foods
has a
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lot
pros sides.
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But
the drawbacks of delivering
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foods
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overweighs
its profits.
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IELTS essay Today's food travels thousands of miles before it reach customers.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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