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“Today’s cheap, mass-produced goods lack the precision and quality of yesterday’s hand-built, carefully crafted products.” DIRECTIONS: Write an essay in response to the preceding statement in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. Explain your reasoning in a clear, well-organized essay that supports your position. Consider both sides of the issue when developing your response.

“Today’s cheap, mass-produced goods lack the precision and quality of yesterday’s hand-built, carefully crafted products. ” DIRECTIONS: Write an essay in response to the preceding statement in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. Explain your reasoning in a clear, well-organized essay that supports your position. Consider both sides of the issue when developing your response. KywnL
The broad assertion that all mass-produced goods are inferior to handcrafted products is clearly overreaching, and I disagree with the statement. Certainly, in some instances handcrafted products are superior, but more often mass production yields more precise, higher quality products. A few real-world examples, including a wristwatch, suit, and personal computer, demonstrate why many, but not all, of today’s cheaper, mass-produced goods have better quality and precision than yesterday’s hand-built, carefully crafted products. The wristwatch is an example of a product that is better when mass produced. My Casio watch was mass-produced with probably 10, 000 other identical units. I purchased this watch five years ago, and it has consistently worked perfectly, with the occasional interruption for a battery replacement. The quality is fine, and the precision couldn’t be better. Contrast this with my uncle’s Patek Philippe, which was handmade with maybe a dozen others. Due to the motion-generated winding feature, his watch stops working when he doesn’t wear it for more than two days! Clearly, this is neither precise timekeeping nor quality of utility. At any given moment, the Casio will always show the correct time, while the Patek’s precision is a coin toss. The claim that mass-produced products lack the precision and quality of handmade goods, in this commonly occurring context, is clearly wrong. However, some products are better as handmade items than as mass produced commodities, such as gentlemen’s suits. For example, I wore an off-the-rack two-piece suit to my high-school graduation. The jacket was slightly large, but the next size smaller jacket was too small. The workmanship was mediocre, with loose threads and a misplaced stitch. It wasn’t cheap, but it was mass-produced, and thus had neither quality nor precision. Contrast this with the handmade, professionally tailored suit that I bought last year. The precise fit is flawless and the quality unparalleled. Though the claim that mass-produced products lack the quality and precision of handmade goods is true in this example, the claim still cannot be applied to all products. To sum up, one cannot correctly claim that all mass-produced products are inferior to handmade goods. The examples describing the wristwatch, the gentlemen’s suit, and the personal computer clearly demonstrate that the claim may or may not be true, depending on the context and product. A claim that is sometimes true and sometimes not is an invalid claim, and this claim implies that it is always true. For this reason, I disagree with the statement, and I contend that most, but not all, mass-produced goods have better quality and precision than hand built, carefully crafted products.
The broad assertion that all
mass-produced
goods
are inferior to

handcrafted
products
is
clearly
overreaching, and I disagree with the

statement.
Certainly
, in
some
instances handcrafted
products
are

superior,
but
more
often
mass production yields more precise, higher
quality
products
. A few real-world
examples
, including a wristwatch,

suit, and personal computer, demonstrate why
many
,
but
not all, of

today
’s cheaper,
mass-produced
goods
have
better
quality
and precision

than yesterday’s hand-built,
carefully
crafted products.

The wristwatch is an
example
of a
product
that is
better
when
mass produced
. My Casio
watch
was
mass-produced
with
probably
10, 000

other identical units. I
purchased
this
watch
five years ago, and it has

consistently
worked
perfectly
, with the occasional interruption for a

battery replacement. The
quality
is fine, and the
precision
couldn’t be

better. Contrast this with my uncle’s
Patek
Philippe, which was

handmade with maybe a dozen others. Due to the motion-generated

winding feature, his
watch
stops
working when he doesn’t wear it for

more than two days!
Clearly
, this is neither precise timekeeping nor

quality of utility. At any
given
moment, the Casio will always
show
the

correct time, while the
Patek
’s
precision
is a coin toss. The
claim
that

mass-produced
products
lack the
precision
and
quality
of handmade

goods
, in this
commonly
occurring context, is
clearly
wrong
.

However
,
some
products
are
better
as
handmade
items than as
mass produced
commodities, such as gentlemen’s suits. For
example
, I wore

an off-the-rack two-piece suit to my high-school graduation. The jacket

was
slightly
large,
but
the
next
size smaller jacket was too
small
. The

workmanship was mediocre, with loose threads and a misplaced stitch.

It wasn’t
cheap
,
but
it was
mass-produced
, and
thus
had neither quality

nor
precision
. Contrast this with the
handmade
,
professionally
tailored

suit that I
bought
last year. The precise fit is flawless and the quality

unparalleled. Though the
claim
that
mass-produced
products
lack the

quality and
precision
of
handmade
goods
is
true
in this
example
, the

claim
still
cannot
be applied
to all products.

To sum up, one cannot
correctly
claim
that all
mass-produced
products

are inferior to
handmade
goods
. The
examples
describing the

wristwatch, the gentlemen’s suit, and the personal computer
clearly


demonstrate that the
claim
may or may not be
true
, depending on the

context and
product
. A
claim
that is
sometimes
true
and
sometimes
not

is an invalid
claim
, and this
claim
implies that it is always
true
. For this

reason, I disagree with the statement, and I contend that most,
but
not

all,
mass-produced
goods
have
better
quality
and
precision
than hand built,
carefully
crafted
products
.
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IELTS essay “Today’s cheap, mass-produced goods lack the precision and quality of yesterday’s hand-built, carefully crafted products. ” DIRECTIONS: Write an essay in response to the preceding statement in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. Explain your reasoning in a clear, well-organized essay that supports your position. Consider both sides of the issue when developing your response.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
430 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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