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Today, the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful. Do you think this true? Are young people today worse than their parents, or does ever new generation get criticized by older people

Today, the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful. Do you think this true? Are young people today worse than their parents, or does ever new generation get criticized by older people G272
Compaired to their predecessors, most media briefings today depicts the younger generation as mischevous and not workcoholic. I do not agree with this description, due to the changing faces of economy and culture make the generation gap much wider. Today we lives in a world completely different than two or three decades ago, not only owe to the technical advancements in present day, but also to the necessities of the society. Moreover the young people born after 90s enjoy much more privilages in working and education environment so they instinctly think and act uncomman than their parents. However this phenomenon is not a fault in their ideas and personalities, it happened because their ideology is slightly deviate from conservative beliefs of previous generation. For instance many young adults today not prefer to do works consuming more physical labour, insted they use machienes as the first choice, The older generations dissatisfaction about the behaviour of the young people is not a serious social issue because, they always compairing attitudes of the young people with their youth which they spent in time different than present. Furthermore this criticism will repeat from generation to generation as every generation looks about their sucssesors from their own perspectives of perfectness. For example if present youths became parents, they will start to criticize their young ones citing the things that they do not attempt to do in their youth like overuse of technology. The time difference between old and young generation is lead to the conflict of generations in ideologies that mostly higlighted mass media. The view of laziness and disrespectness of the younger generation comes from their attitudes towards tasks in present society. This conflict will extend to the upcomming generations as changing trends in the world.
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today
depicts the younger generation as
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mischevous
and not
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workcoholic
. I do not
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agree
with this description, due to the changing faces of economy and culture
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make
the generation gap much wider.

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we
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lives
in a world completely
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than
two or three decades ago, not
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only
owe to the technical advancements in
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day,
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also
to the necessities of the society.
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Moreover
the
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young
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people
born after 90s enjoy much more
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privilages
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they
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instinctly
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think
and act
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uncomman
than their parents.
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ideas
and personalities, it happened
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because
their ideology is
slightly
deviate from conservative beliefs of previous generation.
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young
adults
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not prefer to do works consuming more physical
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labour
,
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insted
they
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use
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machienes
as the
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choice,

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generations
dissatisfaction about the
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behaviour
of the
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young
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people
is not a serious social issue
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because
, they always
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compairing
attitudes of the
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young
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people
with their youth which they spent in time
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different
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than
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present
.
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Furthermore
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sucssesors
from their
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own
perspectives of perfectness.
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if
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present
youths became parents, they will
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start
to criticize their
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young
ones citing the things that they do not attempt to do in their youth like overuse of technology.

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old
and
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young
generation is lead to the conflict of generations in ideologies that
mostly
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higlighted
mass media. The view of laziness and
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disrespectness
of the younger generation
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comes
from their attitudes towards tasks in
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present
society. This conflict will extend to the
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upcomming
generations as changing trends in the world.
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IELTS essay Today, the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful. Do you think this true? Are young people today worse than their parents, or does ever new generation get criticized by older people

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
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